I love this story, but the cliff-hangers are killing me.
Still loving it. You're getting lcoser and closer to payoff and I can't wait to see what it is.
I really can't remember if I've reviewed this story. I just re-read what there is so far so I thought, what the heck, if I have, it deserves two reviews, if not then shame on me. Anyhow, I love this story, its funy and its got Lucius in it. The thought of him having a mid-life crisis is just too funny. I love it, and caqn't wait to see more. Maggie
I'm loving this story and can't wait for another chapter, it's well written and exceptionally canon. ;) looking forward to more. Rai.
Oh man this last chapter...and that last bit with Draco....funny! So very very funny! I can't wait for an update!
This is really well written and very entertaining. Did I mention original? Update soon!
I really enjoy how the tone of this story. The way you go back and forth with the questioning and then the actual events...well it's just brilliant.
Your Snape is hilarious! on to the next...
I absolutely love this so far!!! on to the next chapter...
Nice addition. I like the way this unfolding towards Lucius finding out who Helen is. I still like how you "interrogate" different people to pull the story together. I really want to see how the whole thing plays out. :)
I read it, I liked and when's the next part coming?
Thanks for continuing to write this story: I wwas looking forward to it.
Great story! I love the direction you're taking it in, and I hope you'll be posting further chapters soon :) Looking forward to reading more... ~ Tricksy
Great Start! Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait to write the rest. :-)
I have enjoyed the story so far and look forward to the continuation of the story. I am drooling for the next chapter and eventually completion.
No apparation on Hogwarts grounds! Otherwise, cool story :)
Author's Response: If you are speaking of the vagueness of the apparating in Chapter 2, I have now dealt with it. Otherwise, I can't find it. Thanks.
I really like this story - the plot is nice, the characterisation shockingly accurate. And the 'story within a story' thing is just wonderful.
Looking forward to more.
Greetings from Poland,
Novinha
more more more soon soon soon Please this is wonderfull. Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Oh my gosh! This is great! Just when I'd about given up hope in ever finding a Lucius/Hermione fic, and here we have it! Oh, but it's not the horrors and angst and terrors one typically finds in this pairing, and Hermione is formidable in her own right, as well. I'm finding all the characters believable, the dialogue witty (there are some spectacularly funny lines)...they're all great! And even though Lucius isn't quite as evil as it seems he should be, the way you built that made perfect sense and so it's quite easy to accept. I just rec'd this on my LJ, gotta get the word out that finally someone has good, *funny* Lucius/Hermion! YAY!!! (and damn, now I've gotta wait for an update). Okay, will do so without bugging you too much. ;-)
Author's Response: hehehe... You made my day with this review. Thanks for the rec as well. Unfortunately, I'm terribly lazy when it comes to answering. But I was working on the next chapter, so forgiven?
There is a distinct lack of L/H out there and even less comedy. I'm always on the lookout for more...
Lucius will regain some of his evilness soon and more info regarding his relative complacence is upcoming.
I certainly hope this lil fic continues to entertain you. :-)
I'm really enjoying how this is unfolding. It's so neat to get different POVs through the use of the interrogation. I can't wait until someone, preferably Lucius, finishes the story of Hermione's identity being discovered.
Author's Response: I'm glad to see the shifts are working. Lucius will be the one speaking about his discovery of Hermione's identity, but that is only the beginning. I am most looking forward to writing that scene.
I do hope you continue to find entertainment through this. I aim to please. :-)
Please do go on with this! I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Working on feeding the addiction! Thanks for reading!
Loving this story! I love this pairing! WOOT! Keep it up. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Three cheers for interesting pairings. Patience is a virtue, but I toil onward on your behalf. Next chapter in progress!
I am loving this story!! Keep it coming! Sometimes the interogation/flashback style doesn't work but you have got it right! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: It works? Yes! Next chapter in progress. Thanks for reading!
LOL, I liked the house-elf reference at the end. Poor Hermione, there are some things she just can't hide! Interesting story so far.
Author's Response: Yeah, Hermione will always be Hermione, no matter how cleaned up she gets. Thanks for reading!
giggles and the last line causes me to think of captain sparrow. lovely story. i love lucius and hermione. they are very good in this one and intriguing. id really like to know how their pairing would ever come about and you're doing a lovely job of convincing me it would indeed happen. although.. if i get my way, i'll have him to myself.
Author's Response: Ah, the wonderfully quotable Captain Sparrow. Though I was much familiar with the phrase before, the good captain's performance certainly influenced me.
Good to know it's more likely than I expected. :-)
I'm sure you'd have competition to keep him.