Good start - can't wait to read the next chapter. I like how you skipped the 'getting to know ya' part and that this story is starting from a different place in the DM/HG ship. Since they are already standing together (even though just as friends) it gives a lot of room to explore the other factors that would be involved in a DM/HG pairing.
Omg i need to read more! please update!!!! PLEASE??!!! Kristine_Waterfall xoxoxoxo
more more more. i loved it !!!!!!!!!!!!when will there be more?
I just have one word for you: More! This story is highly addicting and needs it's own warning label.
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review. I just realized you could get reviews today when I was updating and it totally made my day. Maybe you could design a label for me :P
This story is awesome so far. I thought that it was especially funny when the students were making the people in the portraits nude! Good grammar and everything. Georgia
Intriguing begining! I can't wait to see how it goes! :)
more and soon! :-)
I need to read more chapters before I can decide if I like this or not. It does have an interesting setup though.
Hmmm, what will Lucius do? I can't wait to find out!