[Report This]Date: 09/02/2005 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, Lucius is a smooth bastard, isn't he? I love the way he charms Doris. I'm not sure who to feel more sorry for: Hermione or Lucius. Interesting how he's the one to get over his old prejudice while she can't. of course, his is for selfish reasons. :D...As for the present tense, it's a little annoying though I am getting used to it. I think reading it in one dose is helping.
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2005 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Just stumbled onto this one. I love the whole idea of the L'Amour Contractuel. It all sounds like great fun. I love Lucius' rationale behind choosing Hermione, all very logical....Oh if only Hermione knew that Lucius was already winning Doris over, the smooth bastard that he is. :)
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2005 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
I LOVE IT!!!!, it's funny and serious at the same time, with a very realistic situation- thats the way i like it- and I simply love your lucius, sexy and devious as he should be. i saw that there aren't many reviews on this story, which is uncommon of good fics. Well what can I tell you, please keep updaiting, i have seen that is very slow.
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2005 02:03 am Title: Chapter 4
I love the concept of this story, it's much like the Marriage Law Challenge on Ashwinder! I can't wait to see more! Keep up the good work and update soon, please!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very interesting dynamic you are setting up. I hope to see more soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh, so frustrating! Hermione really is being stubborn - if Harry were in the same position, she'd be helping him regardless. I'm glad he's trying, and he won't be happy with Remus helping Hermione with the galleons. Hermione should get Lucius to swear an oath to tell her the truth, then ask him why he is after her, although I'll be surprised if Harry and Remus don't figure it out soon. After all, they know Lucius is shunned right now by society, and they'll see him accepted when he's with Hermione. I just hope Hermione tells her mom the truth about Death Eaters soon. Thanks for the new chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter...although if I were Hermionie, I would have hexed Harry to Hades and back! What a bastard! More asap please, still loving it!
[Report This]Date: 08/24/2005 05:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Ironic, that the author needs dentals done when her main characters mother is a dentist. Anyway, although I agree with the others that have said that it is rather hard to read in the presence tense I have managed to change the wording as I go along so that it reflects thrid person. I'm enjoying the fic none the less and Lucius is the charming git we all know and love. Continue with the great work and I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! I am glad you are still able to enjoy the story even though you find it a little hard to read.
[Report This]Date: 08/17/2005 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well if people avoid your story because it is written in the present tense then it is their loss! I am enjoying this story and look forward to where you will take it. That Lucius sure can be a charming bastard when he needs to be, that's why we love him!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, Lucius is a charming bastard. Unfortunately, he tends be more of bastard then charming most of the time but I wouldn't have him any other way.
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2005 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, man. Hermione is so screwed, and not in a good way! Good chapter. Maybe she will eventually learn to tell her mother the way of the world. What a trip! Thanks for the post!
Author's Response: Thank you! And well, the truth always outs itself one way or another. Hermione may come to regret keeping so much hidden from her mother.
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2005 12:51 am Title: Chapter 3
I have enjoyed the first three chapters. I actually had not realized that it was in present tense until you pointed it out at the beginning of this chapter. I guess that is a compliment in of itself, if the reader doesn't notice it, then it was done well. I read often and just about everything I can get my hands on, just so you know.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to hear you didn't notice the tense so much. I was worried that it might overly distract many readers.
[Report This]Date: 08/12/2005 05:57 am Title: Chapter 3
This story is so interesting. I love what you're doing. I see a bit of my own mother in Mrs. Granger, and I just knew Doris would flub it. Sigh! I'm very much looking forward to the next installment. ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! And a good thing she flubbed it or else the story would have ended right there!
[Report This]Date: 08/12/2005 02:47 am Title: Chapter 3
thank u for updating! i luv the story!! i would kill my mother if she did that!!! can't you start updating sooner? please?
Author's Response: Thank you! I always mean to update as soon as I can but RL gets in the way so much. Chapter 4 is waiting validation so expect an update soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2005 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oops, Hermione better have that letter of Disengagement written and handy at all times! I do fear for Mrs. Granger's life - Lucius was happy enough to give her that scar, he may not have any scruples about killing her, especially as he has already thought about being Hermione's "bereaved widower." Scary! BTW, thanks for getting rid of that scar; it sounded horribly disfiguring.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing every chapter! I really do appreciate the the feedback. And don't worry about Lucius killing Doris just yet. He needs her as she is very much on his side.
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2005 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ahem ... A large, face-deforming scar remains ... take her mom to St. Mungo's? And tell her mom to never accept gifts for her? Her mom is a dentist - she should be very bright, unless Lucius put a compulsion spell on the gifts so that Mrs. Granger feels "compelled" to make Hermione wear them. Very intriguing chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2005 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
A large, face-deforming scar remains - won't Hermione notice that and wonder why he didn't heal it?
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2005 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
Man, poor Hermione! I'll be anxiously awaiting your next installment. I do have to say I hadn't even noticed the tense of the story. I wouldn't worry on it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter has been submitted for validation.
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2005 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like it, it's devious and interesting. Keep posting more!
Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2005 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
when do you write more??
Author's Response: Quite a bit of this is already written. It's just a matter of me polishing it up for public viewing. More will be up soon as chapter 4 is waiting for validation.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2005 11:05 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this story. The set up for their courtship is just delicious. I'm looking forward to the unfolding of this tale. WEll written Hermione/Lucius is so hard to come by. Please continue...
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. I loved writting it and can't wait to post certain future chapters.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Fab! More please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have just submitted the latest chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love your story! I will check for updates!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've just apdated and am awaiting validation.
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2005 01:06 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh I LOVE this! You must write more and VERY quickly! *waves a bar of Honeydukes' Finest under your nose for incentive*
Author's Response: Thanks!Tempting me with chocolate always works! The next chapter is waiting to be okayed.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2005 08:08 am Title: Chapter 2
I love this story!!! keep writing! there aren't enough cool stories (no offence to any authors reading this) that keep my interest. Continue!! please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! It's been updated!
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2005 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
What an interesting idea! I'll be looking forward for updating!
You see is rather strange to me, I mean I'm a russian student and don't know many details of English language, but I find it to be a language of real events, something easily to be believed in. It really is!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's just been updated. :)