[Report This]Date: 07/31/2005 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yeah! Yeah! Oh, MrLucius! is a scheming bad, bad boy. He has set Hermione up but good, having "saved" her mother. And since Hermione has not been exactly forthright about the severity of the war, Lucius is the only one who will have mum's support. Poor Hermione, she's in for it. Thanks for the post!
Author's Response: LOL...yup...Hermione is coming to regret lying to her mum so much. Her lies are going to cause quite a bit of trouble for her. Thank you for commenting! Chapter 3 is waiting for validation.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2005 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1
This premise may have promise, but the consistent use of present tense makes this awkward and difficult to read. Stories are almost always written in past tense for a reason; using the present tense to tell a narrative story is almost impossible to pull off convincingly, even for a professional writer.
Author's Response: You are not the first have an issue with the use of present tense and I highly doubt you will be the last. I know that a lot of people have difficulty reading them or find them awkward and jarring. Personally, I enjoy present tense fics and had never had a problem reading them but I am fully aware that many others do not feel the same. I expected that some people would not read or like my story because of the way it is written. And I am fine with that.
At any rate, thank you for at least taking a chance on my story and taking the time to share your thoughts.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2005 03:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to chapter three... jeez, what is she going to do?!
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter three will be up soon. I don't want to give too much away but it's not Hermione you should be worried about...though she has a lot in store for her as well.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2005 02:14 am Title: Chapter 2
I like it so far! Now we know why Lucius was so anxious to set poor Doris up!
Author's Response: LOL...yes...now you know! There much more to come of that. Thank you for commenting!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the beginning of your story! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Thank you! It will be updated very soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
oh oh oh well well well!!!!!!!!!!
Another beautiful story of Hermione and Lucius!? and iven if it is not completed I really love it!
but please update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!111
Author's Response: Thank you! You won't have to wait long. If all goes well, I will be adding another chapter later today.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2005 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for posting this here. I'm so glad you decided to post it and continue writing even though this is, as you said, now AU thanks to HBP. You got a "fun" premise going and I look forward to watching it develop.
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! I do kind of wish I had waited for HBP to come out before I started posting this as with a few changes here and there the sotry would have worked even better with the new canon. Ah well...at least this way I can have Snape as a relatively good guy.