I'm really enjoying this so far and I'm hoping that real life won't get in the way of my reading the rest fairly shortly. However, I was wondering about the editor's name... Miss Blackstone? Is that an entirely random choice, or did you deliberately amalgamate Blackwell's and Waterstone's? It probably sounds like a ridiculous question, but it just struck me. Again, thanks for writing. Very intriguing! And a very good Snape!
Oh, I miss this story. Is it abandoned?
Oh dear, I'm definitely hooked! Now I'll be checking everyday for the next chapter.
Its good so far...I thought he was going to give the money back and that would count as his second gift...that would suck I am glad it didn't happen that way
No one can resist the unmagical charms of Lucius Malfoy...even Hermione...tee-hee...I absolutely heart this story! *sigh* I am eagerly awaiting the next installment!
i am absolutely in love with this story...i really should be taking notes for my gov't and politics test on Monday...Oh Well!!! off to the next chapter!
I love this fic - LM charming Doris without magic, to his manipulations with the gifts - I cant wait for the next chapter.
I love it! Keep 'em comming!
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
I love it so far! Please, Please, update soon!
Oh, and to reply to lemonade8, remember that Lucius knows an *undetectable* form of Imperius...quite handy, and might explain Doris' thickness...though possibly she is just charmed by Lucius like everyone else. *eagerly (albeit patiently) awaiting next update*
Ooh great story, I only just discovered it! I hope you still intend to complete it, it's got loads of potential.
oooo! When will the next chapter be up? I only just stumbled over this story yesterday, but I love it!!! update soon!
Please post a new chapter soon. This wait is making me cry :( Post Please
I am enjoying your story so far :) I look forward to an update
hm, this is interesting. I like how you have woven Lucius' character.
Lucius is good, I'll give him that! I love how you worked in JKR's backstory for Dean Thomas. But when is Hermione going to start using her cunning to get back at him? Lying to her friends - not a good sign! Maybe Theo Nott could help her?
Oh, I was so glad to see an update to this story. I love your Lucius!
YAY! I am finally done chapter 7, took me long enough, eh? Any ways, I love this story so much. I know, I have already expressed my un-dying love for it. Any ways, update when you can, I undersand that life gets in the way most of the time. Zephie
Hello, YAY! Chapte 6! Happy New Year, tomorrow I get to read chapter seven and then wait till you update. I know that life gets in the way of updating so I won't be one to complaine if it takes you a while. Love Zephie
Twaz good. I'm actually enjoying this fic, which surprises me because I'm not really a Hermione/Lucius fan... I more of the Harry/Draco veriety. Any ways, your doing really well and I hope I oculd read chapter 6 now, but I have to get ready for work. Well good job Zephie
an excellent chapter
No, Hermione, no!!!!! He still wants to kill you and your mum, and be your "grieving widower"!! Why doesn't Hermione talk to Snape and some Aurors who have killed people? Snape especially would know how to help her. C'mon, Hermy! Don't let the Slytherin win! This Stone thing sounds like heroin; dangerous.
OMG I love love love this story. I can't wait to see how things will turn out.
Oh, by the way, I do love to read this, I reread the review and was horrified to see that I didn't get around to telling you that in my rant at Lucius and Hermione! (see, you made me care) My apologies at being remiss. Your Lucius is just so slytherin that it makes me wonder about you!!! ;D