I liked the banter when they initally saw eachother at the bar. The squickiest part of this story is Ron & Narcissa. Ick!
I love all of your stories. you have a fantastic style of writing and wicked humor.
Hahaha, this ficlet has insanity written all over. Very nice, I like a scary, plotting and set to rule the world Hermione. The matter-of-fact tone in which you write her is delicious, I just love it. I especially enjoyed the end. Live happily ever after, cause she said so. Very nice.
this definetly puts a different spin on things.
17-01-2007 02:06
Of all the HG/LM ships I’ve read, this is my favorite.
I like how you took care of Ron and Narcissa. Having the two of them apparently abandoning their spouses to be together makes Hermione and Lucius’s hook-up socially acceptable and eases the way to the Ministry.
And as I like to find art to match stories, here is one by makani that I think fits the Hermione in this story (picture would be rated Conservative):
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9244220/?qo=118&q=by%3Amakani&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
(Bonus: Ron is used to being nagged, and I'm sure Narcissa would find her new husband a nice, imaginative change of pace, so I don't think things changed for them once the potions wore off. Imagine Molly with her new daughter-in-law and Draco with his new step-father! Is France far enough away?)
Author's Response: I couldn't leave Ron and Narcissa simply hanging around. They would have protested otherwise.
Lovely comic from Makani! Yep, very much my Hermione.
I forgot to think about Molly's and Draco's reactions. That would have been fun to see, wouldn't it?
Reader's Response: Molly and Draco's reactions would be another story altogether...(is that a plot bunny I see lurking at your site?)
Thanks again!
10-12-2006 07:12
Hi Maddy Riddle! I enjoyed your story very much, especially the last sentence. How very Hermionish! What a great plotter she could have turned into if she had been sorted in the Slytherins! I am also stunned at your use of English. Very good work! All my admiration. Best wishes from Rome. Mariaemilia
Author's Response: Tante grazie.
I think the same. If she had been sorted in Slytherin she would be ruling the world in no time. She had the ambition, just not the blood to be there.
09-12-2006 16:21
Nothing like a little world domination to bond over. I like how you worked Snape in there. :)
Author's Response: Snape is never far in my mind, so he had to make some sort of appearance. ;)