I love this story. Women taking over the world. The scene at Azkaban with a group of prisoners in one room, Bella and Hermione are quietly talking by themselves and Severus and Lucius looking on, is inspired.
Lovely lovely lovely using Harry’s sleeping beauty POV in the epilogue. I thought his acceptance of changes made was wonderful. I have to tell you the first time I read that Harry would go live among the muggles post voldy (Arsenic Jade’s Origin of Myths trilogy) I couldn’t believe it. But now it feels like the only real choice he could make. Harry has always wanted was to be a regular boy and only life among muggles would do it. Bravo to you Miss Maddy for writing Harry like that! I fan girl you! But you knew that!
The best line for me in this whole chapter is: "Some sniggering from Lucius at young Severus' Victory Dance was met with mild hexing from both Severus and Hermione." It is a reassuring thought that Snape had some happiness in his childhood. Fan fiction is a good thing! Go Packers Go!
I KNOW I have read this story before, but this chapter felt entirely new!! Perhaps I have finally irretrievably lost my mind? Here are some random comments in full fangirl squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Other magically afflicted persons the vampires. Yes please write me a HG/SS vampire story. I am trying to gather enough vampire stories together for a quiz. They are sparse.
I LOL at Lucius back on Hogwarts board if only to annoy the ministry. Brilliant.
Muggles “prancing” about in the wizarding world? Excellent verb choice. We should all prance more often.
Many many rounds of applause for the primary school and squib education. You have taken JKR’s world and made it a utopia.
Author's Response: *preens*
You have taken JKR’s world and made it a utopia.
I turned JKR's world into Hermione's world. And it was fun to do it. *lol*
My most favorite line of this chapter is: "One time was enough learning experience. I won't make the same mistake twice. I will only claim I was young and enthusiastic. And the tattoo looked cool, too." It pains Lucius to be honest, but its for the best. I know I have read this before, I am still enjoying the reread.
That was brilliant - I haven't laughed so hard over a fanfic in a long time. You very well may have read him, but your style reminds me very strongly of Terry Pratchett's. Based on your stories I think you might enjoy some of his fictions. Thank you for a great read and I hope to see more from you!
Having read the entire story I must say I like it very much, however I do feel that you changed the plot when you look at the start and the ending. Nevertheless it was very well written and well placed in Rowling's world.
Wow, what a shock for poor Harry! I wouldn't imagine he'd take it with such aplumb, but I do appreciate that it must be nice to just walk away from that world. Finally, he's not a celebrity! Good ending :)
How is it that I haven't reviewed this story yet? It is wonderful! Your sense of humor is delicious - everything sounds so fresh and slapstick. Great work, keep it up! (I always look forward to updates.)
The whole chapter was HILARIOUS! The vengeful part was top-notch - I haven't laughed like that in a long time! Great story so far. Bravissimo... MORE! Please!
it's lovely! i adore it! update soon!!