love your OFC, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you like it. Rosmerta isn't really an OFC. She is one of the minor characters. I have given her some background and personality as I see her. I hope to update soon.
hellooooooooooo? hellooo? helloo? (nothing but my echoes there) oh, please dear writer, do come back to us, we are sorely teased and awaiting more!
Amazing! I absolutely love this story. A Rosmerta and Lucius pairing is highly inventive.
it is great to see a new chapter, I'm looking forward to more!
Two weeks of abstinence?! Gah! Sated at last. Love the descriptive emotions of frustration, doubt and numbing agitation in the beginning of this particular chapter. Another brilliant addition to this tantalizing tale. Yeah. I am liking how the spy game is panning out. Looking forward to seeing where the next turn will lead. Thanks for the submission. Never disappointed. |+| Phedra |+|
I really love the Narcissa as a bitch angle. Although... I have to say that if you're going to cheat on Lucius Malfoy, you should go all the way. And she did. I'm impressed that Voldemort at 76 is still so verile ;) Perhaps a new body fueled on the blood of an angsty teen is just what he needed. I love the wicked traitor Narcissa. Gives her some spunk ;)
Author's Response: Harry is quite passionate about everything. Almost feel sorry for Voldie to have that 'angsty teenage blood' coursing through his veins. It seems as if he is putting it to good use, though. heh. Glad you like evil, bitchy Narcissa. I didn't want her to just be behind the scenes.
He's so direct, if he only knew ;)
Wow.. i inspired a plot bunnie.. wow.. hehee. that's is cool.. I like your Lucius.. This is an interesting story and an interesting Pairing.. I don't think i have ever written a Rosmerta fic before.
Z~
Author's Response: Well, you know how bunnies are...Thanks for the help! I am glad you like this. I have only seen one other Rosmerta fic and she was paired with Snape. I was surprised myself at how well she and Lucius fit. *smirk*
Helloooooo oooo oooo
hmmm, nothing but echoes, now where did that writer go? sigh...left hanging... geez, she's probably *studying* or *working* or otherwise being *responsible* with her life. C'mon girl, get your priorities straight, we're...um...unfulfilled and dripping with anticipation. If you promise to update soon I promise to stop using *s and ...s.
Ok, ok, take this tongue in cheek please (lucius?), we know you have a real life, it's just the story is so entertaining we are impatient and we want more. There, I said it bravely, now I'm going to run and hide before you whip me (lucius?).
Author's Response: That was such a light thrashing I got...when I probably deserved a little harder (definitly thinking of Lucius, here). I am studying but in two weeks I will be done and have a break. I promise to update then. Since you were right there will be no whipping for you today. (Sorry)
*Shudders* Grossness all around with Narcissa and her lover. A extremely good read.
Author's Response: I hope I didn't scar anyone with that one! I am glad you liked it.
OMG! This is so good!
How original to have Lucius and Rosmerta pair up! I wouldn't have thought of that myself.
I like the tension and the little games they're playing with each other! I'm sure looking forward to reading more of this story.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying this story. I hope you still feel that way after reading the most recent chapter. *wink*
Wow! I didn't realize it wasn't Lucius until he asked about her 'husband'... well done! IMHO you write a very enjoyable combination of plot and PWP :-)
Author's Response: Great! Thanks. That is what I was going for, although I didn't want to traumatize anyone. lol. I know I sound stupid but what does IMHO stand for?
This is a very cool story. Although I'm gonna need therapy after reading this chapter. Narcissa's 'lover' is...ugh! Still, nice surprise. I know I was shocked.
Author's Response: Thanks! Just to warn you, though. I am a poor grad student. I cannot help with any therapy bills! I promise to make it up to you all.
Dumbfounded is all I can say after reading this and I mean that in a good way.
Author's Response: Then I will take it in a good way. I don't like my stories to be too predictable. Glad you liked it.
Ewwwwww! Narcisa and HIM? Whew, didn't see that one coming!
Author's Response: I know that was disgusting. You can never tell what I will do. Hope you enjoyed it anyway!
Freakishly addicting plot you have here! Even though Malfoy is evil, I still like him. Strange.
Author's Response: Thanks! That is quite a compliment. Evil Malfoy is what I like best!
God I love ya! I was so hoping to get Narcissa's take on the whole thing and you delivered. Yup, no love loss between those two. But with Voldemort? Whoa! Damn, she's a bitch! Lol. Thanks for the great chapter and quick update.
Author's Response: It is nice to be loved! She is a bitch. I wanted Narcissa to be more involved. Hope to update soon.
I agree with all the other reviewers, this is exceptional. Who knew evil old Lucius could be so interesting? Okay, on to the story...since Rosmerta obviously loves Malfoy, will she inturn betray the Order for him? Hmm......
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind praise. Lucius is definitely interesting! To answer your question...I'll never tell.,,
It'a absolutely wonderful! Please write more and update soon. I dont want to wait to see what happens. -pout- I LOVE IT!!!!
More, more, more! =D
Solid chapter. They are a nice couple...snicker. Sexy, strange and wild, but a nice couple. One question, does Narcissa know or even care? I'd love to read about that!
Author's Response: I know this response is a little late. I hope I have sufficiently answered your question. lol
*Wink* Smart girl, she thinks on her feet. And I don't care how short the chapter was, it was hot!
Sigh, your story is the only reason I visit this site! Awesome chap.
Lucius should just leave his wife and run off with Rosmerta. I think she loves him enough to do it. Kidding aside, is he going to do something bad to her?
Hm, Lucius is such a dirty, untrustful bastard--and that's why I like him so much. Ha! They want each other so much but really can't trust each other. Her with good reason! Seriously, I do think he cares for Rosmerta in his own way. I hope! Dynamite chapter.