Praise be, another chapter! Of course ... well written, vivid, sensual and playfully erotic. This pairing and the subtle plot excels to new heights with each new addition. Keep up the great work. Love it. Thanks |+| Phedra |+|
Well, at least their sex life is never dull. Now all they have to do is work on those trust issues...ha! I hope this doesn't end badly. *Hint*
Author's Response: Now would I let it end badly? Trust me...
Well, if Lucius can't be helped, how about Rosmerta getting with Snape? Why do I have the feeling this wil end babdly for all involved?
Goood! Please, a chapter soon ! :)
Yay! I don't think anyone minds PWP. If they do, they oughtn't to complain, anyway. :0) Write more soon.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wHEW! I'm out of breath!
well i would write a review if i wasn't so busy running out to rent passionada... ;)
The suspense is killing me! I'm dying to know what will happen between these two besides great sex.
Hmm, well if Lucius ends up in a bad way at the end of this fic, there's always Snape. Lol. Tasty scene with Rosmerta and Lucius at the table. I likey. ^_^
Oh deary me! You can add plot to this or any other story you wish to create. Bloody brilliant! Not only did the read get an extremely well thought out 'plan' for the evening's events, but some extemely erotic 'Lemony Pie' goodness. Love it, looking forward to the afore mentioned chapter you said you were working on presently. [My chuckle quote: “Sorry,” Snape responded with a straight face. “I’m not that good of a wizard.”] Thanks for updating. |+| Phedra |+|
One word describes this chapter and this story--OUTSTANDING!
Very hot! I love how the story is progressing. Too bad Snape isn't quite a good enough kisser for her. He seems much lower maintenance. *smirks*
Thought this was bloody brilliant, as the Brits say. Just one thing though. Lucius has no redeeming qualities...that's why we like him! He should play the right bastard he is till the very end. Still, I pity Rosmerta for loving him. Amazing story.
I'm conflicted! I hate Lucius yet love this story! What's a girl to do?!
Oh yeah. PWP my ass. More like spots of PWP inserted into a great story. hmmm. makes me hot and cold, just like Rosmerta - an enjoyable sensation. I look forward to more!
Well, your imagination is incredible. I could almost feel each touch. I'm at work too! Nice, vivid wording. Okay, where ya going with it?? Hurry up D!
Ah, a new chapter ... happy, joy. The expectations of the reader are sated. Eloquently written, delightfully playful, deliciously sensual. So many completely miss the mark when it pertains to the senses, especially that of aroma ... this work has no trouble detailing and covering them all with great pleasure. Thanks for sharing, looking forward to future installments. |+| Phedra |+|
A 10! Each chapter is a 10 and then some.
What are you waiting for? Write some more!! You're much braver than I am, writing PWP, even if there happens to be a bit of a plot involved. Don't you just hate that? heh heh. Have an abfab day!
Author's Response: It took me a while to actually write PWP! I was inspired by all the good ones out there. Some just have a bunch of cliches so I wanted to avoid that. I was afraid this story was getting a little sad for PWP so next chap will be more upbeat. Rosmerta is not one to feel sorry for herself for long. She is a fighter.
Hmm, so good. Can he be saved?
Aw, poor Rosmerta. This chapter was very bittersweet. I hope she can save Lucius from himself, but then this is Lucius we're talking about. Might just be too late. Great chapter. Update soon!!!
Can you write a little faster??.....I know - no pressure! My imagination is peaked and I'm running out of things to read at work! Hurry up D!
Author's Response: I am writing as fast as I can! Here is the next chapter. I hope you enjoy. I will also be updating Power on Tuesday. It would be sooner but that pesky thing called school. Thanks for the review J!
One of the best fics EVER! And I'm not saying just because I wrote it...I'm kidding. Seriously, good stuff.
I know I've already reviewed on another site, but I really LOVE this story! ^_^
Holy cow! You've managed to shock me. Not that I wasn't expecting Lucius to play the bastard he is, but Rosmerta's role was surprising. I love the idea of her getting something over on Malfoy. Excellent plot turn this chapter.