[Report This]Date: 08/14/2008 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice, but are you going to elaborate on the story. I'm dying to read more. It sounds like a very interesting beginning to a twisted version of the story.
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2007 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very...abrupt ending. They didn't kill her, yet, and they plan to take her to Voldemort...so, what happens next?
Well done, though you never mentioned *what* Draco's offer was nor what project Hermione was working on. I was also surprised to see them back at Hogwarts for 7th year.
But the intrigue, and switching from Ginny to Hermione's point-of-view (only to reveal the lover at the end) was well done, I thought. It would have been a surprise, if not for the dark!Hermione warning ;).
Author's Response: Without going into too much of the detail for the prequel (of sorts), Hermione talked them into going back to school. I plan on explaining everything in the next portion. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. That you for letting me know what bothered you, and what you enjoyed. Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2007 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! you may be a newbie but girl, you have definitely got the talent. i love evil!hermione. and draco is just perfect in every story...
anyways, i look forward to more great things from you. by the way, i love pirates of the carribbean also. great job!
Author's Response: I appreciate you taking the time to let me know that you liked the story. Evil!Hermione just kind of surprised me, especially this one. I plan on furthering the tale - although it will probably be one-shot at a time. Prequel first, I think. Thanks :)