Tenderly rendered and brightly, beautifully relentless. Brilliant and terrible, like the eyes of your namesake.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! What a lovely comment. :)
I like the foreshadowing you did in the story: about Draco wondering if he'd let a dementor into the hut, and later, this line: "her eyes appeared as if they would burn him to a crisp with their gaze alone." And finally his death, the description of the green flash of the curse.
Good timing, too, as in a few days, all will be revealed!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry I didn't see this earlier.
Phew, I'm certainly glad it didn't turn out as it did in this story, as I dearly love Draco. I really appreciate your review. :D