I am deeply impressed thusfar. A believable beginning from both points of view. We shall see how it suffuses in future chapters.
Dianara
Author's Response: How do two people who hate each other, get together without one of them conciously working on it. Outside forces. That is what inspired these two chapters.
Interesting start. I am definitely interested in reading more of this. Will we find out what Narcissa wrote in the letter?
Kim
Author's Response: Yes you will find out, but you'll have to wait a bit for it.
Very interesting start. I'm looking forward to you continuing with this story
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to get chapter 2 only soon. My beta is working on it as we speak.
okay, much like Lucius' my curiosity is indeed peaked... please do update. A nice start. Am very curious to see what was in the letter.
Author's Response: Thanks. You'll have to wait for the letter a bit, that's still a few chapters away. I'll give you chapter 2 first.