its been a good story so far but now im left wanting lol. Please update soon..
Very nice story! I hope that there is another chapter on the horizon!
03-16-2007 13:17 Rated 10
A good storie, that needs an ending ;)
02-28-2007 14:53 Rated 8
I've really enjoyed this so far, I hope it's not abandoned!
12-19-2006 21:33 Rated 10
cool
Wonderful story. Your doing a great job of writing interesting and believable versions of all the characters. Can't wait to find out more about Selena.
Author's Response: Chapter 13 has more on our lovely little girl. Though on request I'm changing it a little.
I love this. Selena's got this wonderful innocence about her that seems so angelic to me. While I admit normaly I prefer Draco with Ginny, matching him with Hermione for this story works perfectly. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I started reading Hermione/Draco stories, when I first got introduced to fanfiction. I thought it would be great to write a story like that. Now, my interests lie with Hermione/Severus, but I still needed to write this story.
I am still enjoying this. I look forward to your next chapter...
Author's Response: Tomorrow, I'm sending of the next chapter to my beta.
I just stumbled on this. What a lovely story. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, there will be.
Definately like this story, please keep it going, its excellent :-)
Author's Response: Will do, don't worry.
more more more more peazz!!!!! excellent story, i love it
Author's Response: Soon, hopefully.
Well, I'm glad to see Hermione is affecting the slytherins. I can't wait to see Harry and Ron's reaction...and ginny, too... update soon!
Author's Response: There will be more of them soon.
wow after all that wait...another cliff...ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...i do like the reaction of snape when he finds out he has a daughter...not over done but still alitlle frantic and shocked...i liked it....more please!
Author's Response: Ah, sorry about the cliffs, I seem to end with those often.
Please, please, continue writing this story. I'm enjoying the storyline and your style of writing. So many stories I have liked yet have gone unfinished I am hoping that you will continue and complete.
Author's Response: I promise I will complete this story. Though I have a hard time writing it, it is something I want to finish simply to find out what the ending will be like.
That was a great chapter. I do hope you get a chance to update again soon with mor information about severus's reaction. It's also good to see the growing... trust? between Draco and Hermione....
Author's Response: Nice word for it... trust. I don't know what it is yet, actually that's what I'm currently struggling with in chapter 12. There will be more on Severus and Hermione's friends in the chapter to come.
Wow are you going to update, because Wow i am on the edge of my seat.....so many questions...what will Severus say, how will Draco deal with having a little sister....what role will Hermione play? oh please update soon i beg i plead.....please
Author's Response: The next two chapters are with my beta and I'm currently writing chapter 12, so hopefully soon. Many questions will be answered.
Great story! It's just so sad you had to leave us hanging with the 'Selina Anarya Snape'. Lol, but it was a really good story! I think your a really good writer! =)
Author's Response: I'm waiting to get the next two chapters back from my beta, but I have heard that she has gone missing, literally. I'm going to ask my other beta to read them for me, hopefully there will be more soon.
Wicked! I loved the ending of the last chapter and how so many things were happening this chapter!
Author's Response: I guess you will love the next chapter then, a lot happening in that one too. The story will be picking up soon.
o_o abso-bloody-luty awsome. serious. you have a very matter-of-fact style that I enjoy, though the things you try to hide are appearent, and I love this tone and new idea. looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: I wouldn't be able to write in any other style, I try but it never works the way I want it too. I'm glad you think the idea is novel. I love reading stories but when I write something I want it to be something else. The first thing I ever wrote was more of the same, but this is all mine.
OOOOHHHHH juicy cliffie! I must confess that I suspected the delicious Prof, Snape to have been indiscrete. The Black eyes did give the game away somewhat too. Brilliant so far....Hurry up and update soon PLEASE? LOL ;-)X
Author's Response: The next two chapters are with my beta. Hopefully I will have them back soon.
Wow....just wow, i saw it coming that it had to be snape but damn....that little girl is in for a ride....and so is draco.....update soon i just have to see where this goes
Author's Response: Chapter nine is currently being looked at by my beta, hopefully I will have it back soon. I don't think it is Selena who is in for the ride though, more everybody around her, but you'll understand that later.
Go Narcissa!!! She got herself some Snape! *lol* sorry. Great chapter, and I found myself worrying about the house elf and all of Selena's clothes and things. Poor girl! I wonder if they will tell Snape.
Author's Response: I'm actually thinking of writing the story of Narcissa and Severus, when I finish this one. Oh, and don't worry about Selena or Nalya, the latter will come up in small ways, here and there.
Nope. Didn't see it coming. Like, at all. Cute though. Selena is very bright for a three-year-old, but I guess that goes with Narcissa saying that she was incredibly intelligent for her age. Are we going to find out why the Death Eaters want Selena?
Author's Response: Not sure on that one. I'm currently really stuck on getting chapter 12. I finally got Hermione's friends in there, and a bit of another plotline I'm working on. I do really need to get the Death Eaters in there. Hey, writing this just gave me an excellent idea. Thanks!
I wasn't sure, but I thought it was the most likely candidate. Esp when Hermione recognized it....
Really good story. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I dropped little hints, here and there, though I thought giving Snape's name as one of the characters was a dead give away.
I liked this chapter more than the last one, but the Draco at the end seemed a little out of focus. I mean, sure, his life's been turned around, but I don't think he'd say, "Mrs. Malfoy won't be coming around anymore." He just seems too... aristocratic to say something like that. Of course, I could be completely wrong and it totally fits with the story, but it was just an observation. I liked your detail in this chapter. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks.