Reviewer: snapeaddict Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2004 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

I hope this can be reviewed chapterwise...I'm a newbie and don't know how things work yet. I'm not through with the story and will review later, I just noticed two minor typos I wanted to point out: Pansy had drawn a border of little hearts (had been drawn) around the edge. and Don’t even bother (to) coming in after me

Reviewer: ksevfansd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2004 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for updating. I am really enjoying this story. I like how she is keeping it from the boys. I would still like to see some of the old Draco though, maybe fighting with the boys. update soon!

Reviewer: run away mental patient Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2004 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

awsome story! and it was such a long time coming. who cares if your spelling 'irks' any americans. the books are british so you spell mum m.u.m not m.o.m etc. i dunno why they had to print 2 versions of the philosophers stone. did u know that for the movie they had to re-shoot every scene where they said philosophers stone and replace it with sorcers, just for the americans. HOW LAME

Reviewer: ArienAstera Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2004 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

I just found this story a few days ago, and I'm so glad I did! I was wondering how long it would take for you to update, but thankfully I didn't have to wait long. I've just recently taken a liking to Hermione/Draco fics and this is one of the best I've read. I'll wait impatiently for the next update. :)

Reviewer: Whimsy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2004 10:57 am Title: Chapter 6

The mounting of Draco's broomstick had me laughing - will she manage to ride the real thing??

Reviewer: interoffice correspodence Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2004 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

Damn good. You made Draco likeable but also had him stay in character. Nicely done.

Reviewer: run away mental patient Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2004 07:05 am Title: Chapter 6

HeY! GreaT fiC! KeEp it uP! uPdatE soOn, and cAn u plZ emaiL mE wHen yoU dO? magicstar008@hotmail.com Emma

Reviewer: Sarah J. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2004 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow, you've made me actually like Draco even more and I didn't think that was possible! Great chap.

Reviewer: ksevfansd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2004 09:30 am Title: Chapter 5

Good Chapter! I love the bit about the cologne. I could almost smell it, too. I can't wait for chapter 6. Go Hermione!

Reviewer: Bambu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 11:41 am Title: Chapter 5

This is terrific. A nice bit of craftiness on Hermione's part, and some lovely character growth on Draco's part. The kiss was excellent, her fearful boldness and his involuntary welcoming response. The fallout from this will be interesting. Does Hermoine help him win the bet which will enhance his standings in Slytherin at her expense? And will he allow it? Or will he continue as if he hasn't won it at all? Interesting developments in either direction.

Reviewer: ksevfansd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2004 09:02 am Title: Chapter 4

Poor Hermione! She doesn't know what she wants. Great chapter. I look forward to more. I like that Draco is so manipulative. We wouldn't want him to get all sappy, would we? Update soon!

Reviewer: Daintress Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2004 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is a great story - you don't jump right into them liking one another, and you portray the developing crush really well. Very convincing teen love story! I'm really looking forward to the rest. Hope there are showers at your campground!