[Report This]Date: 11/16/2007 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very well written. You really made Pansy into a dimensional character which is really hard to do. At first she's so simple; she really does everything they tell her... Love it.
[Report This]Date: 08/19/2007 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very creepy indeed...the feeling that she was a china doll on display was just...*shudder*. A rather strange tradition, but I get the feeling that if the son were stronger, the father wouldn't be able to carry it out. The tradition seems to suggest that a man should not permit his wife to be shared, and if he does...the consequences are his own fault. Very creepy, though!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2007 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. It was a breathtaking story. I love your story and the way the events unfolded.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW!! I'm breathless in a way that was kind of sad!!! I like the ending a lot! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW!! I'm breathless in a way that was kind of sad!!! I like the ending a lot! :)
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2006 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. very good progression !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2006 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. very good progression !!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2006 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story!! I like fair presentation of people relationship.
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2006 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Go, that was an amazing new perspective to look at something. I really enjoyed that, and I really felt for and understood where she was coming from. That's good writing.
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2006 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. It's so sexy, dramatic, and vicious. I love to read this story more.
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2005 03:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the best stories I've read in awhile. Lucius about curled my toes.
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2005 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Very, very nice! Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2005 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Very, very nice story. I loved to read it. Well written, sexy and... great!
[Report This]Date: 06/13/2005 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story-very well-written, sexy and a little creepy at the same time. I'm glad someone decided to develop Pansy's character a little and give insight into the lives of pureblood girls.
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2005 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really enjoyed this story. It brought a whole new depth and definition to every character that I don't think anyone else has done.
[Report This]Date: 05/09/2005 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1
That was Brilliant. Just the plot alone is genius. Very good job on this story. In my opinion, this story was perfect with the feelings of Pansy, and how Draco would react to all of this, and Lucius loss of control. 11 out of 10 for this story. :)
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2005 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've never really read anything between Lucius/Pansy, but I really enjoyed this. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2005 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting perspective. Too bad for Draco. He might have been able to be happy if his father made the right choice. Thanks for posting.
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2005 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, really nice story! I agree though, it definitely is eerie, but it still rings very true. It isn't overdone in any way, but instead very possible. I think that's what adds to the scariness of it all.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2005 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very creepy. I can understand Pansy's dilemma and even sympathise a little. Still, it's very creepy 8-)
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2005 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting perspective from Pansy. I like the picture of the Malfoy family that you have painted. I've never read one like this before...excellent story.