[Report This]Date: 07/17/2008 09:03 am Title: Something in the Air
I love this story but i really hope Draco starts getting his memory back soon or that theres a crack in Herm's research!
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2008 12:12 am Title: Something in the Air
I never thought it was Narcissa and this confirms it. It saddens me that the memory that Draco keeps having is of his mother's death. I really hope that something triggers Draco's memories, though I'm hoping that his hatred for Hermione either is not triggered or if it is that the good memories with 'Jane' out weights the bad. Great job and please post more soon! ~Krystle Lynne~
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2008 11:01 pm Title: And One to Grow On
I can't help but utter a "yessss!" everytime I check the updates page and find "A Pound of Flesh" at the top...Another great chapter. I hope Hermione figures out something about what happened to Draco soon...the suspense is maddening!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2008 01:35 am Title: And One to Grow On
*shivers* mmmmm...I could just see Draco up on stage and wanted to be in Hermione's place. I loved this whole chapter. The interaction between Draco and Hermione and even the interaction between Hermione and Luna was awesome. I was happy to see that someone noticed that Hermione left the reception early. Awesome job and post more soon please! ~Krystle Lynne~
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2008 09:21 pm Title: And One to Grow On
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Like it, I LOVED IT!!!!!!! This vhapter was more exciting than actually going to a strip club. lol I really have been enjoying this entire story and can't wait to read more. I like this alter Draco, a muggle Draco that he would become without the influence of his family. I just hope that if and when he get's his memory back, he doesn't become an idiot toward Hermione. They seem to work together.
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2008 01:19 pm Title: Research
I love your story! Are you still updating? I want to know what happens when Damien finds out he's Draco!
Author's Response: update in the works, my friend. Just waiting for it to be validated.
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2008 02:04 pm Title: Making a Memory
just wanted to encourage you to keep up the writing - i've really enjoyed reading as the weeks go by
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2008 02:24 pm Title: Making a Memory
i love how you update within three months. some people don't. i like so many stories that are not complete and never get updated. it's disapointing. so you'll understand my gratitude towards yourself. normanlly i don't read WIP but i found the summery to intreging, and sense i started reading it, i have been captivated by your writeing. i love it. keep up the good work, lovey. your pleased and devoted reader, dracoronschick ~ashleigh~
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2008 03:41 am Title: Making a Memory
I loved this chapter, the fact that Draco kicked his buddies out to help Hermione made me smile. Great job and post more soon please! ~Krystle Lynne~
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2008 11:25 pm Title: Making a Memory
Beautiful.
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2008 03:54 am Title: For Better, For Worse
I loved this chapter...for many reasons. I'm so happy for Ginny and Harry, but I want everything to work out for Hermione. Great job and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. ~Krystle Lynne~
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 09:21 pm Title: For Better, For Worse
Excellent chapter...can't wait for more! I'm hoping Hermione doesn't regret her decision to go to Draco in the morning...I love it when they are together.
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2008 06:25 am Title: For Better, For Worse
no way that she can give him up after this... :) one of your best chapters.
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2008 02:30 am Title: For Better, For Worse
I love this chapter! And I love this story! Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2008 02:18 am Title: For Better, For Worse
I absolutely agree with you. This was an amazing chapter. I really hope everything works out for her...
[Report This]Date: 06/04/2008 04:56 pm Title: For Better, For Worse
It's like africa - way up high and way down low and everything in between
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2008 10:29 pm Title: Hermione's Charmed
Aaand...(sorry I feel compelled to better explain myself) Hermione is perfect in this story...she is in canon as is Draco. Thank you again for your story!
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2008 10:17 pm Title: Hermione's Charmed
I figured after I wrote "so out of canon" you would think..."ohhhh". But honestly every person's idea of in canon is a bit different and I absolutely see pieces of the Hermione and the Draco in your story. That is why I love it. And I never review but after this I was compelled! You are a fantastic writer. Period. And I didn’t mean to startle you out of your thought process!!
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2008 11:46 pm Title: Hermione's Charmed
My goodness! You must finish this story! I NEVER read stories where the characters are so out of cannon...but this is fabulous! I love the plot and I love the characters as you've transformed them...perfection...PLEASE finish!
Author's Response: Wow... Talk about a slap back to reality. I see now that I have failed miserably in my attempts to keep Hermione in some form of post-war AU canon, as well as show a Memory-Charmed Draco completely humbled by the horrifying starkness of his situation. I mean, yes... I realize that in Canon, Hermione would probably have more morals than she does in my story, but canon Hermione hasn't been through what APoF Hermione has been through... But I didn't think that the characters were SO out of canon.
At least you like it.
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2008 12:30 am Title: Hermione's Charmed
I do not envy Hermione for what she went through with Rowle, though I was very happy to see that Hermione was there for her. I am very curious to see if Draco does remember her calling him by his real name rather than Damien in the morning. Great job and I look forward to reading more. ~Krystle Lynne~
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2008 07:56 pm Title: An Interlude with Damien King
I feel so bad for him... its easy to feel like you're "less than" when life forces you into that particular career choice. /= If this doesn't get a happy ending I'm going to probably ruin my keyboard by getting snot on it and it will be all YOUR fault! =P Wonderful job so far though.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2008 01:49 pm Title: An Interlude with Damien King
was excited to see an update at another website. was a bit disgruntled at first since it was the same as the chapter before but then i thought we'd hear the conversation that the boys had on the bus. no such luck. but then i got a bit mad at myself cause wasnt i asking for draco pov? but it did carry on so that was good. and maybe draco will remember calling her and her calling him draco. and wand in the ass pocket draco? dont you know thats dangerous?
[Report This]Date: 05/02/2008 04:42 pm Title: Oh So Sweet Revenge
I really like this story :) its original :) I hope you update sooN!
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2008 10:22 am Title: An Interlude with Damien King
Great story! I'd actually been reading it on coloured grey when I saw that you had it up on another site with more chapters. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Again, great writing!
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2008 08:34 pm Title: An Interlude with Damien King
Just found this fic today and read it through the latest chapter. I'm quite intrigued and curious as to how this going to turn out. I have a feeling its going to get VERY BAD before it gets better. :) Hope all ends well! Update soon!