[Report This]Date: 05/17/2005 07:38 pm Title: Tending to Injuries
Just wanted you to know that I'm enjoying this.
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2005 06:54 pm Title: Tending to Injuries
Ooh, they ALMOST kissed! Rats. Nice sexual tension Draco going on. Draco is steadily growing on me with his not so bastardly (is that even a word?) behavior. Anyway, love the story.
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 11:05 pm Title: Nightmares and Realizations
Good bridge chapter. I'm hoping that one of them will start speaking to the other. I hope your muse keeps you inspired. Thanks for the post!
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 06:29 pm Title: Nightmares and Realizations
Very nice pacing and development; after seven years of enmity at Hogwarts, it would clearly take time for Draco and Hermione to get on the same page. I am curious about how the war is proceeding, and that errand Hermione ran for Harry (the Order?) - it wasn't just a simple thing like delivering the package to Tonks, right? 'Cuz Tonks could've told Harry that Hermione delivered it. Thanks for the new chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 05:35 pm Title: Nightmares and Realizations
I love what i've been reading so far! Your story moves very smoothly and it sure has me guessing all around what is going on. im curious about what Mione was doing, how she got caught, what 'was done' (for harry and ron) and -hee hee- how Draco is going to keep reacting to Mione!
Great job and please do keep going!
Cerridwen
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2005 05:57 pm Title: Uncertainty
Witch hazel?? Umm, is Snape alive, to make healing potions? Muggle witch hazel doesn't sound very effective. Can Draco use glamour charms or Polyjuice to disguise himself when he goes outside to shop? Thanks for the new chapter!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2005 11:41 pm Title: Uncertainty
Loving the way your story started out, and I also love the way your portray Draco. lol Can't wait til you continue your story!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2005 08:39 pm Title: Uncertainty
Short but very good. Draco's inner thoughts are a good read and I like how he can't sem to stop thinking about her. Aww!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2005 09:45 am Title: Uncertainty
your building a nice little plot line- I'm looking forward to see where it takes you/us
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2005 02:04 am Title: Uncertainty
Excellent story. I like the way you are portraying Draco. Can't help but love these two together. I am excited to see where you take this story.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2005 10:05 pm Title: Uncertainty
This story has promise. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 05/09/2005 02:10 am Title: The Next Day
nice story hope you update soon nintschi
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2005 12:02 pm Title: The Next Day
A totally different start, its a interesting angle. Look forward to future updates.
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2005 02:45 pm Title: Surprises in the Alley
Hiya! I just wanted to stop by here and leave a review. You know that I enjoy this story, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2005 10:09 am Title: The Next Day
I like this story already and I'm just dieing to know what happened to Hermione and what exactly is "done." Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon...
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2005 05:56 pm Title: The Next Day
ooooo good chapter. I'm curious about Hermione's mission. And good job on Draco’s character. I really like your take on the Slytherin.
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2005 02:33 am Title: The Next Day
Smart of Draco, not getting into a fight with three foes. Is Snape alive in this story? He'd be able to make healing potions, although Draco should be able to make a few himself. How does Draco eat if he stays inside most of the time? Thanks for updating!
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2005 12:14 am Title: The Next Day
It sounds like you've got a great story in the works. :) Please do update soon!
I liked how you made Draco reply firmly and maturely, without responding to Ron's baiting.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2005 07:13 pm Title: The Next Day
you've got a really good start. I'm anxious to find out what's been going on and where it's headed.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2005 02:41 pm Title: The Next Day
I'm intrigued with the mystery of what Hermione was doing that got her so hurt. And how did Draco manage to get away from his family? Interesting. Veddy interesting.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2005 02:35 pm Title: Curses
This is obviously a chapter for "moving the plot along", but I like it. I especially like it when Ginny is depicted as the strong girl I think she is (at least she is in canon). On to the next chapter! I wonder what "mission" Hermione was doing when she was attacked? Hmmmm.
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2005 12:14 pm Title: Surprises in the Alley
This could be a really great story line! It is well written and I really look forward to reading more!
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2005 05:53 pm Title: Surprises in the Alley
Veddy interesting. I'm curious as to what will happen next. Please continue.
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2005 04:42 pm Title: Surprises in the Alley
a rather interesting beginning, I must say.
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2005 11:55 pm Title: Surprises in the Alley
Wow, wonderful first chapter. I hope you keep up with this story. You have me hooked! Please update soon.