*whaaa* please keep going! I wanna hear more!
*tears* Gods, I'm so desperate to know what happens with Remus and with Tonks... it's like... two cliffhangers in one. (Granted, Tonks will get better since this is the past... but I want to know what happens. Update soon? :)
O. M. G. I was so depressed and then... my jaw just completely dropped at that last line. I mean... dear Merlin. BRILLIANT!
AWWWW why did you stop writing:( It's a beautiful story!!
I loved this story when I first discovered it this summer and just found it again today. I hope you continue; the characterizations are wonderful and I'm (again) dying to find out what happens next!!
I loved this story when I first discovered it this summer and just found it again today. I hope you continue; the characterizations are wonderful and I'm (again) dying to find out what happens next!!
if I had tearducts I'd be crying right now. Wow, that was amazingly heartwrenchingly good! I'll be awaiting the next chapter. cheers MB
How heartwrenching. I like how you are mixing flashback and present to reveal the story. I can definitely see Remus trying to protect Tonks from how he looks after being burned. I know he thinks he's protecting her, but someone needs to tell him that he's not.
aaaaawwwwww! they're so cute! can't wait for more.
I swear, every chapter tears at least one sob out of my throat. *growls at Remus and Order* Stupid people. She's gonna bloody well kill herself at some point. (*bleakly* It's what I'd feel like doing)
-Mel
Author's Response: It warms my heart that my story illicits such a reaction. Thanks so much for reading.
Interesting. I am not sure she could forgive him his lie of omission though
oh damn! if he survived then she's gotta know! she's a klutzy but knowledgeable (and probably powerful to be an auror) witch by not telling her, you're making her a loose cannon. i hope you continue this and have her find out or have hp take pity on her and tell her.
Okay, there most definitely has to be more to this. Please? I'm dying to know what has happened that they are keeping it from here. This is a great teaser and seems like a great setup for a story. :)
no, they were absolutely wrong in not telling her that remus lived, because that is an awful thing to do to a person's heart...sorry, got slightly carried away...i am a HUGE remus/tonks shipper, and i get very sad when they don't end up together!!! great wording...favorite part: In no mood to be mocked she whirled around, half expecting to see Fred or George, perhaps even Charlie; she was ready for a row. But instead of seeing someone to unleash her fury on, she saw the man that she had been in love with for years. Her anger melted as he looked up at her, a bemused grin on his face. He could do it to her every time. yay and hurrah to you, great writer of remus/tonks ships
It's perfect. I love it. The ending of the chapter broke my heart. Please, please, please, please post more. (Do I have to continue?) Please, please, please...*drifts off* -Mel
great story, but like i said don't make me have to kick ur cute little butt... I can't wait for more baby!!!