Hello there! I just discovered your story and I really enjoyed it! I love the way Lucius is so very canon! Tell me; did you base your characterization on Jason Isaacs' interpretation? I can just picture him so well through your writing! That dance in the previous chapter, my my my! It was SO very sexy that I found myself simply holding my breath! The wait is almost unbearable; your plot is evolving superbly, just at the right pace, keeping us on the edge of our seats. Well done, and I am looking forward to your next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you. I think that is a great compliment. I do try and keep Lucius as canon as possible. He is based on the portrayal by JI. It makes it easier to write because he does Lucius so well (and is sooooo sexy!) Thank you for your review. Next chapter will be up soon.
This is good! But I can't believe that Lucius pushed her away! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! The next chapter will be up soon.
That was an evil cliffhanger. Just evil! ~ Angela
Author's Response: Evil...cruel...I am starting to get a complex. Updates are coming soon. Thanks for the review!
Okay, what's Lucius' game? Did Narcissa walk in? It's sad that Hermione is trapped with her loneliness. I doubt she would have chosen this life, if given the pertinent information. I wonder why she doesn't at least consider divorce? Mull it over, talk it out with Draco. I mean, I never pictured her as a gold digger, and settling for her father in law without trying some other options seems a bit odd. She might even try for separate lives, separate bedrooms. Staying with Draco in his room must be torture. She can't be expected to keep it up. You probably already have that explained in future chapters, so I'll quit asking. Very angsty.
Author's Response: I agree with you about Hermione. This is really a kind of sad story. You will find out more later. Thanks for your thoughts.
Oh, bother! Lucius, you tease! Talk about a evil cliffhanger!
I was delighted to see this updated, ksevfansd! Hopefully RL won't interfere too much in the updates from now on! I don't think my heart could take the suspense! ;)
Excellent job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I am writing as fast as I can. I have two chapters waiting. Hold on to your heart!
ARGH!!!!! That was just hopelessly cruel! Oh, I can feel the poor girl's frustration!PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: Cruel? me? Maybe just a little. Must be Lucius rubbing off on me. okay only in my dreams. ;) I have an update ready and it will be posted soon.
ohhh...mean, mean cliffhanger! but this was a good chapter. i want to either smack lucius or screw him...or both. hehe. write fast!
Author's Response: I agree, why can't we do both! I am writing as fast as I can. My beta has the next two chapters and I will post them soon. Glad you are enjoying this.
Okay, now I'm really curious. Don't keep us waiting too long on what the deal with that necklace was. Poor Hermione, first she thinks he wants her and then he pushes her away. I can definitely feel her frustration.
Author's Response: You may have to wait a little bit...but not for the next chapter. I have written the next two already and will post again soon. Thanks for the review.
OH! THE SON-OF-A-BITCH! How could he? After all this time, this is what we get? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!! UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Okay...I see that you are upset. Lucius is truly evil! But that's the way we like him. ;) I will try to update soon.
Argh! What?! It's agonising waiting for these updates....what an evil cliffie!
More please... ;)
Author's Response: Sorry...don't want anyone to be in agony. ;) I will try to update soon. Thanks for the review.
I feel bad for Draco and Harry.
ACH!!!!!!!!!! Damn! That was definitely getting my blood racing! And then I went to go on to chapter 6.............. Except.............THERE IS NO CHAPTER 6 YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I AM PULLING MY HAIR OUT FOR A UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! Save my head....post an update PLEASE!! xox
hot damn, you are *such* a tease! ...but I like it...
OMG! Please let there be more! I was so engrossed and then suddenly it stopped and I was hauled back to reality! This is one of the best Lucius fics I've ever read. More soon????
I love this story. In this chapter, you can *feel* Hermione's reactions, and it's wonderful!
oohhhhh my god! Can you pleaaaseee pleaaase update? This story is awesome, love it, adore it. Pleade write more *plead* Can't get enough from this evil sweet Lucius *sigh*
What a bastard! Oh my goodness. The show must go on please! ;)`
Poor 'Mione. I wonder what's in store for her in the next chapter.
Great job! keep it up XD
I love this story. Lucius is such a beautiful, sexy son-of-a-bitch, isn't he? The cat and mouse game they're playing is very exciting which means of course the writer is playing the same game with us poor readers. Can't wait for the next chapter and see who wins the next round.
thank you very much!
i just like it!
Wow, I realize what's coming, but I would sure love to see Hermione give the men a bit of hell first. Harry!! What betrayal. Draco- sure daddy, I'll pimp you my wife. Lucius.. well, he's Lucius, what can you do? He sure presumes a lot. Maybe the Malfoy evil will rub off on Hermione and she will do something... appropriate.
wow, no one has ever talked to me like that while we were dancing, not even my husband! I look forward to more!