Nice addition, though now you've really left me wanting more. I can definitely see him seducing her with his voice like that. What an interesting fantasy he has. :)
fantastic!! and the last line made me grin. :) this Lucius i could def. get used to...
What a manipulative seducer you've created in Lucius... he's just so good at it! I can hardly wait for Hermione's revenge...
Oh, that was terribly wicked of Lucius. I'm sure if she weren't so dazed and confused that she'd be completely pissed at Lucius for leaving her high and dry, so to speak. He IS an evil bastard. Lucky, Lucky Girl!
extremely sexy chapter!! loved it :)
Thanks for the new chapter, I've been looking forward to it for awhile. Only one thing....more please!
aaaah, you have to continue. quickly. please?
Ooh, now I want more, more more I say!!
I'm so glad you updated! This is a great story. I do feel for Hermione, though. I can see that it would be hard for her to callously set aside everything she's believed in, and the sense of betrayal must feel overwhelming to her. I think at this point, I'd be turning and running as far as I could possibly go! : ) Hope to see another update soon.
omg it's been so long! worth it, but still...update fairly soon? please?
hi my name is megan, i'd like to say your story is sooo awsome and i hope your going to be posting another chapter soon because i'm just dying to see what happens next.
Omg you updated! YES! It was a fantastic chapter, I look forward to more of this. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
In short, this story is addictive. I hardly blinked whilst reading; I blinked a couple of times at the end of the chapter (found out my mouth was hanging open, too), then scrolled back up to the 'throbbing artery' part. Twice. I am very much looking forward to the next installment. Thank you for writing!
This fic is lovely. Please continue =)
yummy! Update soon. :)
Point Lucius. Hermione gave it her best, but weill, we are talking about Lucius here. Oh well, at least if Lucius wins, Hermione wins, too! Thanks for the update. I look forward to your next post!
Finally!!! Love this chapter & I will be waiting for more!!! ^_^ good luck!
Not a fan of LM/HG but i can easily see how this fic could change that. ;)
Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you. I am so glad to see an update and even more glad to see that you should have time to update more frequently. Your Lucius is wonderful. He is everything that I envision in Lucius, even agreeing the Hermione on wondering if he would have a custom made cologne. I was trying to pick out favorite lines, but they kept getting better and better, from the begining with the "pleasant surprise" changing to "surprise". LOL He's such a wonderfully sexy and manipulative bastard. Poor Hermione, she doesn't stand a chance, though I loved her line about not being able to grow a penis. LOL
Lovely story you have going on here, that is all I really can say about it, little twists that make you wanting more by the seconds. Seeing as I happen to be Lucius obsessed myself, this story feeds my small obsession. I only hope that you please update soon to feed my fetish. And I just want more of it... I will stop my whines now. ~~Shush
AARRGH!!!! I was getting so into it... I was really enjoying what I was reading... and you leave me hanging!!!! What happens next?? Does she go scream at him? does he take her in his arms, and beg her to forgive him the need to have her close, and the only way he could do it was to have her marry his son??? I WANT LEMONS!!!!!!!!!!!! Please? Don't tell me you aren't gonna update this soon....
Oh man! I want to know what happens when she tells Lucius off! I am anxiously waiting more.
I really like where this one is going. So the question becomes, which Malfoy will be fathering the next generation? I can't wait for the next update to see how Hermione's confrontation with Lucius goes. Given her fantasies, I don't see her remaining angry.
OMG, what an ending. I have my idea about the words. What a way to put a damper on the mood. You know, I really need a more eloquent review starter, but that really describes my shock....I really liked how you wrote the scene with Hermione ready to jump Lucius in front of his wife. Very well done.