02-09-2007 22:33 Rated 10
nice! can't wate for more
i rather suspected it was because the kid got bit, but still...more!
02-08-2007 23:15 Rated 9
Please continue writing! I want to see where this goes.
01-22-2007 00:20 Rated 10
Great beginning - I'd love to see where you're going with this. Please continue!
12-04-2006 03:10 Rated 10
A very interesting premise! Thanks for sharing; I'll be looking forward to seeing what comes next.
10-31-2006 14:09 Rated 10
very good beginning