Date: 05/29/2012 08:43 am Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
Omg, hilarious. Lol
Loved this:
“Yeah? Good luck with that. One express mail to Azkaban, will it be? Or are you going to forward it on to my alcoholic mother who’s falling apart? Dear Narcissa, on top of your misery of losing your husband, your son found my slut hole too loose to fuck anymore and so he’s gone gay. Sincerely, Pansy Parkinson. Brilliant. Write it up. Please,” he growled at her."
hahahha perfect
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2008 11:45 pm Title: Under My Skin
Also a nice and touching story. You got to something that I think is very valid for Draco, which is that he's a Daddy's boy, dependent on his father and lost without him.
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2008 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was an excellent and very touching story. Not a pairing I would have thought of. I don't believe I've ever felt sorry for Goyle in a story before. Admirable job.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 06:38 pm Title: Reward
i too laughed at the line "“Shut up! All you do is talk sometimes, Goyle, it’s a wonder I get a word in!”" great job
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 06:29 pm Title: Under My Skin
lol this story has such an odd couple yet it works. no wonder you are my favourite author on here. o, btw, spelling mistake - "from it. Watching ever movement from the boy" it should be "every" just wanted to let you kno :)
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2007 10:55 am Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
I LIKED THIS STORYVERY MUCH BECAUSE YOU COULD SEE THE HARSH SIDE OF DRACO LIKE WHEN HE SHOUTED AT PANSY BUT THEN YOU SAW THE SOFT SIDE WITH THE WAY HE COMFORTED HIS MOTHER
[Report This]Date: 12/01/2005 10:42 pm Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
Hmmm...I like this one, it is thought provoking and your depiction of Malfoy is just fantastic. What a horrible boy he is. And the only other thing I have to say is good for Goyle.
Author's Response: haha indeed, good for Goyle!
[Report This]Date: 10/23/2005 05:43 pm Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
Awww, ok now I feel sorry for Goyle, I know exactly how it feels to love a guy that will use you for sex and other things yet say that they do not love you- It hurts, a lot.
Author's Response: It does hurt. Although Draco does like him. It's just... not what he wants :(
[Report This]Date: 10/23/2005 05:36 pm Title: Reward
Awwww, that was actually kind of harsh the way Draco is treating Goyle... I mean, come on! Especially letting Goyle suck him off and saying that it means nothing to him. That would hurt a guy so much (I would know Y_Y)
Author's Response: Yeah, Draco is pretty harsh. He's a spoiled brat, though. Well, and he is just... mixed up in a lot of ways anyway.
[Report This]Date: 10/23/2005 05:29 pm Title: Under My Skin
I doubnt I would have stopped at just -uh- 'fondling the boy’s backside'... *cough*
Author's Response: Haha well, Goyle didn't want to rape him!
[Report This]Date: 10/23/2005 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't mean to be harsh on goyle or anything... but - Ew. I sense Draco getting ready to use him though. Something Draco is really good at doing. (Doesn't mean I don't have a fictional character crush on him though, now that I saw that though - Tom Felton is O_O as well) On to the next chapter for me then <3
Author's Response: Haha. Poor Goyle!
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2005 08:25 am Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
You think I’m too stupid to have feelings? To miss my father? The only difference is, I don’t take it out on the people I like. But maybe I should, huh? Since I want to be like you! Maybe I should start using people to get what I want with little regard for anyone else. And then when people ask, I can tell them how sad I am. Poor little Gregory, you should give him whatever he wants. His father’s in Azkaban!” I'm glad for this and for later when he just backed off.
I really like this Goyle that instinctively knows how things are. I mean, you can be stupid, but there are some things that you know, like: “You’re not attracted.” And in the end we still have: "Sir." I love it. Could we have something else with slowly becoming smart Goyle? Or scheming Goyle? Or just smart Goyle?
Author's Response: Goyle is dumb in some ways, but I think that one somoe level he does know things, even if part of it is because people have pointed this out about Draco. Goyle has a front row seat ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2005 08:17 am Title: Reward
“Shut up! All you do is talk sometimes, Goyle, it’s a wonder I get a word in!” Ha, ha! Poor Goyle. I was surprized at how well Goyle was doing but I guess love makes all the difference in the world. ;)
Author's Response: Draco's a prat, he really should be slapped, but yes... Goyle care about him too much to do that. ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2005 08:12 am Title: Under My Skin
Oh, and I forgot about the Slytherin part of him touching his ass and nothing more. I laughed at that part, I guess Goyle's not that stupid.
Author's Response: He's not terribly stupid :)
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2005 08:11 am Title: Under My Skin
Oh, sweet. But how I wanna kick Malfoy for the way he's treating Goyle.
Author's Response: Malfoy's not terribly nice, but he believes he's in crisis.
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2005 08:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Goyle. I pity him, but I cannot believe that it's possible to feel anything endearing (? spelling) about a character as stupid as him. I kinda wanted to hug him, in spite of everything. :) I love the sir part. :)
Author's Response: He's smarter than he seems ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2005 02:39 am Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
This is the Draco I love.
Author's Response: He's pretty hardcore Draco here ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2004 09:29 am Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
Good story. I thought it kept very canon, except for the obvious M/M pairing. This story was also something different, and the humor was excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I did try to keep them as canon as possible ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2004 11:03 am Title: Fortress Around Your Heart
I know I reviewed on another site already but you can never get too many reviews, right? I thought your Draco was perfect! Almost as if JKR had written it herself. Except of course she probably wouldn't have paired Draco with Goyle. Now I am rambling. As I was saying...Creative and amusing. Good story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Well... yes, I don't know. I'm pretty sure that Draco will end up with Pansy and Crabbengoyle will... who knows. They don't really matter as all they tend to do is pop their knuckles and eat. But... it was a fun thing to create.
[Report This]Date: 09/08/2004 11:09 pm Title: Under My Skin
I know I have already reviewed this chapter but I am waiting patiently for chapter 3 to be added...patiently, I say...Oh, bloody hell. What is taking so long? Anyway just wanted to let you know that I look forward to this chapter & the ending whenever they are able to post it.
Author's Response: :D
[Report This]Date: 08/29/2004 02:04 pm Title: Under My Skin
This is interesting and different. I hope there will be more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2004 05:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is the first fic that made me feel for Goyle. It was a well written chappy. ^.^ Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: It's all done now! Have at it!
[Report This]Date: 07/23/2004 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I felt really bad for Goyle in this...I liked this fic, it's really good.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes... well.. Goyle will survive.