A lady after my own heart... that was very vengeful, but creativly done :)
Author's Response: thank you!
what an image.
Author's Response: I hope in a good way!
The story is good, although the end could be better. I think it was too abrupt. But very good!!
Author's Response: Ahh, well, I liked it :)
Now I know how I'll revenge myself if it ever becomes an issue. Ha, ha! *evil laugh*
Author's Response: Heh! I'm too far south to get a hole of a proper icecicle.
I never thought I'd feel sorry for Lucius,but I do now. Your Narcissa is every bit what I imagined, though. great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
No he hasn't had a chance to read it yet. he's been working very hard this week. I think he went to bed early too.. Which is a good thing. He works 2 jobs so I can stay home an take care of the family.
hope you don't mind but i was "pimping" your story on potter place and snape manor. couldn't help myself. i enjoyed it so much i wanted to share... lol patty
Author's Response: No, I don't mind at all! Thank you very much! Wow, 2 jobs is rough. He sounds like a great guy, though!
LOL Patty
Author's Response: Did your husband like it?
I like the description of Narcissa. It could very well be her... I can't wait to see what my hubby thinks of this.. I can have a sarcastic tongue.. I can tell someone something rude/sarcastic with a very pleasant smile on my face. Hubby says people aren't sure how to take it. Whether I'm actually teasing or if I'm dead serious. Love the game of life.. lol
Great one shot. Well time for dinner. I'll check out your other stories.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, I hope your hubby does too! Could serve as a good warning for what might happen should he step out ;)
Holy shit! Well...jeez, never even thought of Narcissa as a match for Lucius really. I always saw her as the submissive, considering who her sister was.
Wow, something to think about.
Author's Response: The Black sisters seem pretty fiery to me. One rejected her family altogether and one joined the Dark Lord. I think HBP will have more of her in it, so we shall see.
OOH she showed him should write more I would like to see what she does next.
Author's Response: Next, she serves dinner ;)
Sorry. I forgot to add...Bravo! really liked it. I"m done now.
Author's Response: *bows*
No wonder Lucius turned to Snape. That was quite graphic and yet it was impossible to turn away. Narcissa was vicious. I think that is how she would react though. Not caring about the indiscretion but instead the effect it had on Draco.
Author's Response: It was rather graphic and gratuitous. I have to blame my family over the holidays to inciting me to such angry writing. ;)
Yes, I think she's particularly protective of Draco. That's her baby!
That was awful! No, I am not saying you were awful. Just, oh, Narcissa! I have always had this fantasy that she was the evil one and she was controlling Lucius. After all, Bellatrix is her sister!
Very good! I'll probably have nightmares tonight.
Author's Response: I like that vision of the Malfoy household as well. So many people write such timid victimy Narcissas. I like to think of her as the high Matriarch above it all.
so far check out the first paragraph...just read it out loud
Author's Response: Heh