beautiful story, made my cry. great job
very moving and i really really enjoyed it tink your a great writer and please continue
Author's Response: That's the end of that story ;)
*Tear*... I loved that story, that... wow. You write the bestest things. <3
How about you make one with a Cedric/Harry love scene? Please? lol, I will love you forever! (Though I already do) ^.^
Author's Response: aww, poor Cedric is so doomed, isn't he? :D I whimpered each time he came onscreen in GoF :D
Gods. I've read this story before, it's been quite a while since I did. And it is just as powerful and just as heartwrenching and just as all out true for me as it was last time. Once again, magnificently written. And this one is onto the favorites as well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It means a lot that you would reread it and that you still think it's good the second time!
Very poinant and sad... how true to life.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Sometime you jump just to see how it is to fall, said Dorothy Dandridge. Or something like that. I don't know why I'm thinking about that now but I'm more sorry about Malfoy than about Ron and Hermione. Strange!
Author's Response: Sometimes living is harder than passing on, I think. There's a lot to feel sorry for Malfoy about here.
Heavy, heavy. But I HAVE TO keep reading. I was hoping that Harry will come around.
Author's Response: Harry's pretty messd up in this, alas.
Poor Draco! I'm surprized about Harry's dark side and that's the reason I still like this story. That and your way of writing, of course! I don't think that theme would keep me reading if another author had written it! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, that's a really big compliment! I don't write this sort of thing terribly often, I'm glad it worked!
...and there's just often some people in your life that no matter how honest you both are, how well suited you may be, even if they're likely your soul mate; circumstances keep it from playing out like a Hollywood movie.
Tell me about it. That's really great!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's pretty sad that things work out that way, but it's generally how they do.
This is awesome...I enjoyed this very much. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you!
What an amazing story. Disturbing yet poignant. This is one of my favourite fan fics. You’re a very good writer.
Author's Response: Thank you! It was probably the most cathartic I've written.
Oh my, very intense. It's interesting how light and dark sometimes switch places at the end of the day. I like it. I like Draco's dress too, but that's another matter. ;)
Author's Response: The dress is rather interesting ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I, too, did not expect this chapter after the last one! Great story and ending.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
this is amazing, I love it, It's kind of disturbing but very true and brings up some interesting issues.
Author's Response: It's a stange and curious little story ;) Thanks for reading!
His voice scratchy from his manic wailing halted so that he could whisper, "Yours." --- Eeep. I didn't expect another chapter to this one, and I have to say that one came on like a punch to the gut. Excellent denouement.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes... I wasn't quite finished with them. But now I am ;)
I found this story to be honest...and haunting. Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Oh my. I think the most terrible part is, of course, that Harry is one of the on-lookers at Draco's execution. The recounting of Ginny's seduction and punishment also really helps explain a lot about the stories context. Excellent job.
Author's Response: Thanks ;) Well otherwise it just seems as if Harry's lost his mind. Which... he has to an extent. The final chapter is up. It's rather short.
Hard to read, but captivating. It feels like we've walked through the looking glass into a world created by David Lynch and inhabited by Spider Jerusalem's unwanted children.
Author's Response: Here's to hoping that Harry doesn't get any ideas about huffing straight oxygen and screaming "mommy"? *smirks*
I just don't know what to say...it makes you wonder at the horrors they've both been through to bring them to this point. It is sad, yet brutal and honest. well done.
Author's Response: The next response to this-- I guess they're more a chain of responses than really a conventional story-- should explain that, although briefly. :)
Holy angst! You're very good at this whole "poignant" thing! Very interesting story you're crafting here....
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)
Now wait a moment...Harry as we've never seen him (but maybe wanted to), Draco in drag...how can you leave us with Draco as Harry's bitch? You're such a tease...
Author's Response: I think we've seen elements of Harry being like this before. He just didn't have the satisfaction of killing someone under his belt. Or rather the unsettling effects of it. Nor has he been free to do what he would. And Draco... well... he's not keen on being in drag. Nor being anyone's bitch. But he doesn't have much choice in that, does he?
Interesting. We are seeing a new side of Harry...although he did always like to break the rules. update soon.
Author's Response: At the moment this is a one-shot. I might do a sequel, but I can't afford to split focus ;)