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Reviewer: Megan Consoer Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 07:32 pm Title: Chapter Three

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Reviewer: Megan Consoer Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2006 10:14 pm Title: Chapter Three

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Reviewer: The_Goddess_Aurora Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2006 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Three

I like this story very much, the use of flashbacks lends insight into your characters'...character. lol, please update soon.

Reviewer: sassenach Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Three

More? Please???

Reviewer: Parivash Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2005 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Three

i really like this. I usually don't go for the Draco/Hermione pairing, but this one seems well thought out and is very well written. I hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Lola Mertil Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2005 12:39 pm Title: Chapter Three

Come on!!!! You can't keep us in suspence that long, its just not healthy!

Author's Response: I'm sorry, really I am! I'm so stuck on this story at the moment. I'm going to try to work on finishing the next chapter over the next few weeks, but I can't make any promises. I've gone back to college, and that's taking a lot of energy. It makes me happy that you enjoy it enough to be in suspense. I hope people will still like it now that it's going to be completely AU based on HBP.

Reviewer: Fraggle Grrrrrrl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 04:19 am Title: Chapter Three

Can't wait for more! The anticipation is killing me! So, so very tempting, this little tale of yours! oh, and...erm...sorry about all those exclamation points.

Author's Response: Thank you! I do have parts of the next two chapters done, I just can't seem to complete them.

Reviewer: Lola Mertil Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 12:00 pm Title: Chapter Three

Great story, I've read a few, and I have to say this is my favorite. Please, post a new chapter ASAP!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I do have the next chapter partially written, but haven't had any time to work on it lately. I'll try my best to get to it in the near future. Thanks again!

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2005 11:57 am Title: Chapter Three

LOL! Great story, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it, but have lots of distractions at the moment. I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.

Reviewer: if_666 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Three

ooooh! this is great - the back story gives it so many interesting possibilities. i eagerly await an update. he's so obviously interested!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on getting the next chapter done. The last bit of chapter four is actually finished, but I can't seem to get the beginning written. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sisqinanamook Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2005 09:48 am Title: Chapter Three

I thought Draco and Hermione's speech and mannerisms were slightly formal when Hermione was thinking back to Hogwarts, but other than that I really like this. Its a bit different to the others. Nice change as well to have Lavender as the 'friend to confide in' instead of Ginny. Please update soon!

Author's Response: My beta had the same concern about the formality of the dialog. My thoughts on the matter were that when two well-educated enemies are forced to work together they may use exaggerated formality as a buffer to keep from going for each other's throats. I'll have to remember to concede to her superior opinion in the future! Thanks for reviewing and for making suggestions for improvement, it's much appreciated.

Reviewer: Lyndie578 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2005 09:47 am Title: Chapter Three

I'm glad you continued to write regardless of your delays. Thank you for continuing to post. I hope he's come back for her, why else would he bother to spend "wasted" time with her. I cannot wait to see what happens next. I hope you have your plot bunny all worked out and that your muse continues to inspire.

Author's Response: Thanks! Draco has many secrets; I just have to decide when to force him to reveal them.

Reviewer: Black_lust_z Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 05:39 am Title: Chapter Three

Yay, an update *claps hands together*. Fantastic chapter, I'm really enjoying reading the fic. I’m anxious to see how Hermione will react to having Draco around her on a weekly basis. Can't wait till the next chapter! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Stormi Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Three

Nice beginning. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Three

Intriguing, although Hermione is being such a dolt. I hope she doesn't remain a dolt for too much longer. I've enjoyed what you've written so far and look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! She just may have to get past her resentment soon.

Reviewer: cerridwen Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 05:11 pm Title: Chapter Three

i love it!! Please do continue, because I'm sure we ALL want to know what's going to happen. hehe. This story is now one of my fave's, so I'll be checking for updates! Keep up the great work. -Cerridwen

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have quite a bit planned for them.

Reviewer: spitfirecrackre Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 07:31 am Title: Chapter Three

15 emails?! You've got it bad, pal...

Interesting chapter though; it was nice to know the background behind Draco's defection.

Off to work then and I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks! There will be a bit more background info in upcoming chapters. My beta and I were talking politics, so it all got a bit carried away.

Reviewer: jennyjo Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 12:29 am Title: Chapter Three

I'm enjoying this story. It's very interesting looking forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Bex Drake Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2005 05:32 pm Title: Chapter Three

This was a cool chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate that you take the time to review.

Reviewer: Avanell Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2005 01:55 am Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two

argh! Please update soon! this is awesome. Poor hermione...i hate it when she goes without action for awhile (maybe she has some secrets?) anyhow, can't wait for her action with draco. YAY!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I sent the next chapter to my beta this weekend. It may be a few days before she can look at it, but I'll make any necessary changes and post it immediately upon arrival.

Reviewer: spitfirecrackre Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2005 10:34 am Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two

Updateupdateupdate! please..:)

Author's Response: I've spent some time every day working on it. It just hasn't been flowing well, until today. I'm nearly certain that I'll be able to send it off to my beta by Saturday. I had about 20 pages done, and then started completely over again today.

Reviewer: Amara Nevena Malfoy Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 11:05 am Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two

Oooo. Nice start. I love a good mystery with a little angst. Also, your grammar is excelent. I can't tell you how many times I've read fic only to have my head pounding on the table with the horrible use of wording. Great job. I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, reviewing, and the great compliment!

Reviewer: run away mental patient Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 06:39 pm Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two

i hope there are more chapters in the works!

Author's Response: There are, thanks for r/r!

Reviewer: Black_lust_z Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 02:54 am Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two

I love where this is going, very creative. Thanks for loading it up on here, I can't wait for more. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and for stopping by my LiveJournal.

Reviewer: Bambu Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 01:12 am Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two

This is an intriguing beginning, and I look forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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