Great story. I hope Remus and Hermione fall in love. Update soon.
you must continue *tangles up fingers hastily* I'll see to it that I keep track of this story :-) Best wishes, Mimi
whoa, another werewolf? besides Lupin? hmm. wonder if that'll come up later on in the story. anyway, good job on chapter 2 :-) keep it up :-D
whoa. great first chapter. i'm off to read the next one :-) keep up the good work :-)
Now that is what i call a wonderful storie! Now i will be totally unoriginal and ask you in a sarcastic way to *never make me want to read the following story!!!!* ;) Keep it up! even if it is not this one!
What an intriguing scenario! I'm really looking forward to reading more!
Wonderful story so far! Please keep going. : )
WOW! Keep on writing! It's a GREAT story, but I need more! lol
I love this story. It is amazing! It its the best story I hae read in along time! Can't wait for chapter 4!
This is really good! I noticed that you haven't updated in a while, so please do! This is great!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update as soon as possible. My muse just needs to start cooperating. grrr. Just know I haven't given up!
-Adelaide
Ok. I'm hooked now! When's the next chapter?!
Author's Response: Hee! Hopefully it will be soon. Keep watching.
-Adelaide
Wonderful so far! Please do post another chapter soon. I love where this is going:)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to post another chapter soon. I just need to get my writing juices flowing.
-Adelaide
I can't believe she's actually contracted Lycantrophy, it's horrible, but will make for some great plot situations. Can't wait for the next chapter, could you email me when you post the next chapter? hoova4eva@yahoo.com , I'd really be greatful for it!
Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews! Sure, I'll e-mail you when I post the next chapter. Hopefully my muse will come back to me soon.
-Adelaide
OMG! I have just fallen in love with this story...I can't wait to read the next chapter! I think I'll go do that right now...great plot idea, I would have never thought of somthing this creative.
oh...I like it so far. I have to wonder, if that is Lupin, why does she fall under his care? Does he feel guilty? And what was that crack? *lol* So many speculations, so little time! Reading on now!
Really excellent story,just one teeny suggestion though,English schools from 4-7yrs are infants,8-11yrs are juniors and 11-17yrs is secondary or senior,there are schools that we call 'grammer' but these are schools where there is a fee charged for each term and are only for students of 11-18 years who have to sit an entrance exam to gain a place there.Please dont be offended I genuinely intend this as constructive advice and not as a criticism. L.B
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the constructive advice. It took me a few minutes to figure out what you were referring to, but once I figured it out, I was in disbelief that I made such a stupid mistake. I should have looked up the English schooling system before I wrote Hermione's thought about "grammar school." Thank you for pointing it out to me! And don't worry, I am completely not offended. In fact, I'm really glad you told me about my mistake. That's how I improve my stories. Other than that, I'm glad you're enjoying my story thus far. :) Thank you again for your review.
this is wonderful...will there be more?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, there will be more, but my muse just keeps eluding me. I have many outlines, even detailed ones for the next few chapters, but I just can't seem to get the words to flow. I'm going to keep trying, though. Glad you like it so far. :)
Enjoying the story so far looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'll try to update it soon.
Oh come now, you can't leave it this way can you? PLEASE write more VERY soon!! This is wonderful and both Remus and Mione are spot on!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Characterization is always something I'm concerned about; so, I'm glad you think my two main characters are, as you said, spot on. I can't say how much that means to me.
I'm trying to write, but that stupid muse still hasn't returned to me. While I have the outlines, I just can't get the words out. It's very frustrating. I promise I'll get the next chapters uploaded as soon as possible.
Wow! Great job with this story! It has so much potential for development and growth! I look forward to seeing more. Please rush!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you see potential for growth and development, as that's what I think every writer wants to hear.
I'm trying to update as soon as possible, and even have detailed outlines, but I can't seem to get the chapters out. I'll keep trying, though, and hopefully my muse will return to me. :)
I am drawn into this story and can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm trying to update, but the words just aren't coming. Don't worry, though, I'm not going to give up on this baby of mine. :)
hey you should really make another chapter soon, i really like your story and im sick of waiting! lol ok well bye
Author's Response: lol, thank you! I'm sick of waiting too. I've had the next few chapters outlined in great detail, but the words just will not come. >:| I'll try to update as soon as possible, though. I'm glad you're liking what I have so far.
Oh Man! You have to update soon. I need to know what happens!
<3 Tawney
Author's Response: hee, thank you! I'll try to update soon, but I can't promise that with my muse roaming about anywhere but by me. :)
That was fantastic! Hope you update soon...lots of imagination in there thanx again.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'll try to update as soon as possible, but until then, let you're imagination run wild. :)
You've created an intriguing beginning and I hope to someday read more of the journey you've started us on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You will read more installments one day, I promise. I am not giving up on this story. I just need to find my muse...grrr to her.