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Reviewer: pinkbunny Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2005 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hello! This is my very first foray into the world of Hermione/Lupin, and I must say you've got me intrigued! Keep up the excellent work. :)

Author's Response: Hello! This is probably as really late welcome to the world of RL/HG, but welcome! I'm glad you're intrigued by my story so far. I'lll try to update as soon as possible, once I'm able to catch my muse. :)

Reviewer: Vulpes_Velox Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2005 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

Fabulous story. weve all been waiting a while for an update, and we'll continue waiting...ever so patiently...o.0 But really, keep it up. we love it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I means a lot that ya'll are patiently waiting for a new installment. I really love this story, and will not be giving up on it...ever, I just haven't been able to find my muse as of late. However, I'm trying to get her back, and show her my outlines for the next couple of chapters. We'll see how it goes. I'll update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: dwamimok Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2005 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

Please, Please update. Very interesting beginning and I would very much like to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm trying to update, I really am, but real life and the lack of a muse have been getting in the way. I have outlines, I promise, but I just can't get the words to flow. We'll see how it goes, though. I really love this story, and have no intention of giving up on it. :)

Reviewer: lemltd98 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

very good start. can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: shanamadela829 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2005 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

*tear* It's beautifully written...and terribly sad. The realistic sense in it made me shiver. Please continue. I need to know that despite everything Hermione will be alright...

Author's Response: wow, thank you so much. Good to know that I can send shivers down your spine. :) I'm trying to write, and should get some stuff out soon, but we'll see. However, I have to say, I can't completely promise that Hermione will be all right...BUT I can say that I'm not a fan of angsty endings... :)

Reviewer: MC Lupin Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2005 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

More!!!

Author's Response: lol, thanks! I'm trying.

Reviewer: destructogirl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2005 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm I demand you write more now!! Please!! I love the plot, somthing quite different to other stuff I've read recently, Please update!!

Author's Response: hee, thank you! I've been trying to write, and have several detailed outlined for upcoming chapters, but I just can't seem to get it out. I'll continue trying, though. Perhaps now that real life is going well, things will come. Here's hopin' :)

Reviewer: Arella Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2005 03:40 am Title: Chapter 3

Realistic to an aching degree. Your update is eagerly anticipated.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Realism was something I really wanted to include in my story; so, I'm glad I got that across.

Reviewer: Suze Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Yeah... I just read the other review, which was rather insightful and logical, and I'm very, truly sorry, because this review is going to be nothing but gleeful girliness. Just thought you should know, right? Right. I mean, I'm desperately trying to refrain from making silly, overly-sentimental and cliched comments, but your story was simply TOO good. Well, then, *sigh* here we go... *squeals* What a GREAT chapter; I really LOVE your story!!! Oh my God - the action and description were totally exciting and stuff. Please, please, PLEASE continue to update! Honestly, this story is one of my Favorites. Anyhoo, cheers and please keep writing. -do you see what your writing is doing to me? *sigh*

Author's Response: lol, thank you very much! I like gleeful girliness, and am quite familiar with it when I come across a story I really like. I've really been trying to update, but I just can't get in the flow of things. I have several chapters outlined, but darn real life. However, I am trying again, and hopefully I'll be inspired soon. :) Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: Idril Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 02:40 am Title: Chapter 3

WOW!! Please update SOOON!

Author's Response: lol, thank you!!! I'm trying to update as soon as possible, and have many of the next chapters outlined in detail, but we'll see what happens with real life getting in the way and all. :)

Reviewer: RachelW Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2005 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

This looks like a really good story so far, but there are a few things that really stand out to me that make it hard to get into. Hermione was unconsious for four days in the forrest before she woke up? If that is the case as Dumbledore states, then there would be no sticky, slimy blood, it would be completely dry. Also, she seemed to move around too easily for having her shoulder ripped out and having been unconsious for four days. It would have been much more realistic had she woken up first noticing the pain, and there would be a lot of pain from dehydration as well as the wounds, I can't see her waking and wondering why she wasn't in her tent, she wouldn't be that coherent.

Okay, other than that, I do like this and hope you keep going. It does seem rather strange that Dumbledore would go for sending the students into the Forbidden forest alone, however. It would have been better to see more precautions in place since there are all sorts of very dangerous creatures in there.

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive criticism. I really appreciate it. I completely see your point, and wish I had thought more deeply about the physical ramifications of lying unconscious in the woods for four days. However, I am glad that you are liking the story. In the next few chapters I will go more in depth as to what the precautions were that Dumbledore set, and how whomever attacked Hermione got around them. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Rheniel Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 3

Cool so far. Plz continue!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying. :)

Reviewer: sapphiretragedy Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was very well done. I havne't read much RL/HG before, but your story is the one that now has me interested... I can't wait to see where this is going. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that I could get your RL/HG radar going. I'm going to try and update as soon as possible, but real life and a lack of a muse have been getting in the way. But not to worry, I do at least have the next couple of chapters outlined in detail.

Reviewer: tubbles14 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2005 12:55 am Title: Chapter 3

NICE!!!!!! Excellent story!! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm trying to update as soon as possible. I just have to catch my muse so the words will flow again.

Reviewer: Black Duality Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ahh! I love this story! Please update!

Author's Response: Lol, thank you!! I'm trying to get my muse back, but she just keeps eluding me...for now. However, I do have quite a few chapters outlined in detail, so I'll try and update soon.

Reviewer: Slytherin_Snakes_Rule Anonymous star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

That's a great story so far that you have going...and I for one, would very much like for it to continued. And good luck with further chapters if I do not return in the nearest part of the future to read them...

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you like what I have so far. I am continuing this story, but real life has been getting in the way, so I'll update as soon as possible. I hope you tune in, but if not, thank you for the luck. :)

Reviewer: Heartshapebruise Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 10:29 am Title: Chapter 3

AH! I'm loving this story. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to write, it just isn't going too well, with real life getting in the way and all. :)

Reviewer: Heartshapebruise Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you again!

Reviewer: akasha Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

i am looking forward to reading more of this story! hope you post soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I'l try to post more as soon as possible, but there is that silly real life thing... :)

Reviewer: KajisGirl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 01:00 am Title: Chapter 3

Please write more. The story is wonderful so far.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am writing more. The next few chapters are outlined in great detail, but I just can't seem to make the words flow; so, I'll try and update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: Antigone Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2005 02:06 am Title: Chapter 3

This is really a fabulous story. I can't wait to read more and see what happens as Hermione adjusts to life as a werewolf ... but I'm sure Remus will help her out there ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm thinking it might not be an easy adjustment for Hermione...although, I'm sure it wouldn't be for anybody. Of course, as you said, Remus will be there to help. ;)

Reviewer: Melvacaea Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 07:33 am Title: Chapter 3

I love it. It's one of the few 'Hermione-is-a-werewolf' stories that keep me hooked. Well done! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens! -Mel

Author's Response: wow, thank you! I'm glad that I've been able to hook you with the werewolf!Hermione plot. I'll try to update soon. My muse just needs to come back so my words can flow.

Reviewer: Bambu Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2005 02:06 am Title: Chapter 3

This is a lovely set-up. You've got a mystery, a life-threatening experience and reason for Hermione and Remus to be alone with one another while she adapts. You've also got the sensationalist aspect the transformation. I look forward to your next chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you like the set-up. I'm thinking since you liked the sensationalist aspects, then you're going to like the upcoming chapters. :)

Reviewer: knarly Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2005 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you've got me hooked already! I hope you write more of the story soon – I look forward to reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm trying to get more of the story out, but my muse seems to have left me as of late. But, not to worry, I have many more of the chapters outlined; I just need to get writing.

Reviewer: OliviaOffincinalis Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2005 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very promising first chapter! Do continue, please! I shall be waiting eagerly for more. I can't wait for Remus to get involved;)

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