Okay...the opening was great! You took canon and ran with it. I admire that. I wan't liking the Dirty Rooster at all! It doesn't seem like that would be her only choice, but you DID cover your bases, so okay. Then that awful gardener...YIKES! Horrible! Loved the ending...Regulus to the rescue! YUM!
Wow... talk about a cliffhanger! Regulus Black is alive! Great first chapter! I'd love to see more!
Whoa, what a great start! My only question is: if Narcissa saw the writing on the wall as soon as Lucius had been arrested then why didn't she start hiding money and jewels in other countries? Thanks for bringing back Regulus - maybe he can join Snape and Draco in finding Horcruxes, and killing off Kreacher. I'm hoping you create a nice Andromeda, too. (PS - Floramagus.... Floramagus....)
What a wonderful fic. It is filled with every range of emotion, anger, lust, sadness....happiness maybe. Amazing, please continue. Lovely work. What a cliffhanger!
*happy dance* This was excellent! I adore the characterization you have given to both Narcissa and Bellatrix and throwing Regulus into the mix was a mighty plottwist for me. Continue the amazing work!
I loved it! Its a very good story. I love the ending, hehe. I cant wait tell the next ch.
Awesome story line, I can't wait for the next installment. Write fast PLEASE!
ooohhhh that's so suspenseful! i love it. write more soon. :)
Now this is what I was talking about! Great story! Angela/SiriusLives
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It was so fun to write. I will be update this one a lot. Thanks for suggesting it.