I normally dislike second-person fiction and present-tense fiction. Just my old-fashio0ned way. BUT......I am taken in by t his fascinating take on Remus's poijnt of view. Thanks for sharing your idea of his thoughts and emotions. Very well done!
What the heck's that s'posed to mean?
Author's Response: Was there something you didn't understand in particular, or did it just not make sense in general? Sorry if it's not clear, it's just a fic about Remus's last days with his friends and the days after Halloween '81.