I Loved it, I really enjoyed it.
short yet i could feel the anguish through your words and i could see the great sadness in lupins face and heart i give this story a ten
I am a bit confused on the context. Is this after Sirius' death? I guess the wolf doesn't think like a man, but this seemed to have no time - I can't pinpoint it. Very poignant, though.
Wonderful; a real piece of work. Simple yet heartbreakingly sad.
The last line just broke my heart.
Very Poetic, stong Feelings. Keep It up!
Wow, your story brought tears to my eyes. Well done without being drawn out and confusing. Loved it.