Wow, what a powerful story and so well told. Great work!
That was truly lovely. Great job.
That was so great. I loved the ending. It was so sweet.
That was excellent. I enjoyed the characterizations and style. I normally think 1st person to be less developed, but it this case, it works very well.
Oh, my goodness!! I have only recently discovered the guilty pleasure of Snape/Lupin slash fic, and have found that it, like all fanfics, can be done very well or very badly... this is one of the ones done very, very well indeed!! Thank you so much for sharing it!
This is such a beautiful story and I absolutely relish Severus/Remus stories. I feel that they are quite suited to one another and can understand pain better than almost anyone else within the cast of Harry Potter characters. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story with your audience.
Great story. I love Lupin/Snape slash. You did a great job keeping them in character too.
WOW, WOW, simply WOW. It's so beautifully written and characterized that i am speechless. One minor thing: not emough smut. lol. But I am a pervert so ignore me.
I love this!! SS/RL is one of the few M/M pairings that I will read. You did a very good job!