OMG!!! at the end of this story, i was in tears...please write more...your style seems so real
Oh that's too heartwrenching! Poor Remus. Can the man have no happiness?
That was incredibly moving. Poor Remus just can't have anything go right, can he? I can see Hermione doing some particularly dangerous bit of magic that could cause her serious harm if she thought it would help out. Excuse me while I wipe the tears away. :(
great story!! please update soon! its been too long!!!
Oh how sad. They should let her get into hysterics, so she remembers. Maybe she'd calm down eventually? How is she supposed to remember if they drug her? Ignorance is bliss, and I suppose she's happy in a fairy-tale, but poor Remus! And she's got a kid who needs her, too.
it's boring and emotionless... not bad with the description and grammar, but i thought you were using too many cliches to practically force the sadness... the best friend dead, traumatised by the war... a desperate lupin... like i said, boring
OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more to this story. I was in tears as I read this, I could picture this in my mind and it ripped my heart to shreds. WELL DONE!!!!
Oh, this is so sad. I could just picture Remus' visit so vividly. Beautiful tale... just beautiful.
first off its a great story, alot of drama in the first chapter. second what the hell is going on!! things will need to be explained soon :) please dont leave me hanging, update soon. ```Cherry