[Report This]Date: 03/22/2005 04:11 pm Title: Slytherin Ambition
I would rescue Lucius in a breath!! How dare that evil conniving bitch do that to him!!!! Man, excellent fic! Very well done. I truly felt for Lucius (as it shows, lol!) and if there be a way, I will rescue him myself. Such attributes such as he has shouldn't be wasted! Cerridwen
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2005 10:12 pm Title: Slytherin Ambition
I like the Snape/Narcissa pairing a lot. Yet I have to agree, Lucias just did not feel right. I believe the Malfoy men are whiny, but not exactly submissive (but that is just my opinion).
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2004 01:53 am Title: Slytherin Ambition
Well I think this was a great story. Yes, Lucius a bit out of character, but so what, this is an alternative pov that was very well written and an enjoyable read.
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2004 09:50 am Title: Slytherin Ambition
I am sorry but your description of Lucius' eyes is wrong. They are gray like his son's Draco! I also believe your portrayal of him as being led by Narcissa is a bit OC for him. Lucius is in command, and no one need push him around. I say you should fix this story.