[Report This]Date: 11/08/2007 09:10 am Title: Fire and Ice
OMG i read this sytory many many times and always thought it was snape I just figured out that it was arther.I have to tell my friends,thankyou so much for wrighting these storys I love reading the storys off the internet it is so much fun!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2007 04:34 pm Title: Fire and Ice
First I thought he was Severus, then I thought he was Remus, then I thought he was an OC. It never occured to me that it'd be effing Arthur Weasley. That was brilliant.
[Report This]Date: 09/15/2007 06:43 pm Title: Fire and Ice
wow! never expected him to be Arthur Weasley..
[Report This]Date: 07/02/2006 12:37 am Title: Fire and Ice
oh, you so got me; I thought it was Remus. V nicely written, although the idea of Arthur having sex seems to squick me - stupid, I know. Kind of like an extrapolation of Ginny/Draco, in a roundabout way.
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2006 08:03 pm Title: Fire and Ice
I dont get it..
Author's Response: I'm sorry
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2006 09:13 pm Title: Fire and Ice
Beautiful...I admit that I scrolled down and cheated a wee bit, just to see who it was! The suspense was killing me! My new, favourite ship is Arthur/Narcissa. I've never even thought of that one before, so merci buckets for the enlightenment! Positivly thrilling..and arousing story! Intense. DK
[Report This]Date: 10/27/2005 10:30 pm Title: Fire and Ice
LOL!!! That was NOT who I was expecting at the end, but quite good! Hot, too. :-)
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2005 10:25 pm Title: Fire and Ice
woa talk about a twist! loved it! you described it very beautifully^^
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2005 12:29 pm Title: Fire and Ice
Such a surprise as to who she was with! Your descriptions are so poetic, so beautiful, so evocative. Just wonderful. I love fire and ice analogy.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2005 01:16 am Title: Fire and Ice
That was awesome! I would love to see you write something about Lucius! Your writing style is brilliant!
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2005 11:28 pm Title: Fire and Ice
I'll admit to scrolling down to find out who was the mysterious guy with blue eyes if you write a prequel or a sequel. No? Well, then, erm... I read it in order! No cheating here, I assure you. ;)
An interesting way of ending it. No vows of undying love, no clinging gazes. Just pure Narcissa, what with - "She watched in the mirror as he Disapparated, returning to whatever it was he normally did late on a Thursday afternoon."
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2005 05:04 pm Title: Fire and Ice
what do all the warnings mean? like s, l, etc.
[Report This]Date: 09/23/2005 03:45 am Title: Fire and Ice
wow! I agree with the rest, very nicely done, and falling out of my chair at the surprise ending. First thought it was Lucius, then Remus, then Ron. Then was just picking my jaw up off the ground at the end.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed.
Jen
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2005 07:32 am Title: Fire and Ice
You got me. I was thinking Bill or Charlie. You really got me on this. I just can't think of ______ cheating on _____. It's like finding out Ward had a thing going on with the girl from the office while June was baking cookies. Great job!
~Lisa
Author's Response: Thank you! I always consider it an achievement when I successfully string you along ;)
Jen
[Report This]Date: 09/20/2005 10:17 am Title: Fire and Ice
Ummmm, I never guessed it was Arthur until the very end. I think this fic definitely deserves a back story. (Still recovering from the fall of the chair)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. I might write backstory. It is tempting. Really, it is.
Jen
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2005 08:50 am Title: Fire and Ice
Hah! Finally got my log-in straightened out! Loverly little smut. I was probably with everyone else at first, thinking it was Lupin, but this was a surprise. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it. I did briefly flirt with the idea of making it Lupin, but I decided Arthur was more fun ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2005 01:07 am Title: Fire and Ice
Razzle Dazzle! A really well written PWP. Your descriptions were beautiful and I was able to easily follow what was happening. A surprise ending as well. (Poor Molly!)
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed, and I just love how so far no one has said they figured it out too soon :)
Jen
[Report This]Date: 09/17/2005 11:19 am Title: Fire and Ice
*falls out of chair in surprise*
Holy... Wow! Talk about a surprise ending! You had me thinking it was Lucius the entire time! Great job, Razzberry! Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed
[Report This]Date: 09/15/2005 02:24 pm Title: Fire and Ice
You surprised me. I went through all the poorer purebloods and deatheaters in my mind as you kept dropping hints, but I have to admit that I thought of 17 year old Bill with a cocky teenage attitude and OWLs in all 12 subjects before I imagined Arthur. The plot does seem rather cold for a guy with four kids at home and three at Hogwarts to be doing Narcissa, but the pairing is very creative and the story well written.
Author's Response: I have to say it surprised me too, initially. I don't know where the idea came from, but as I thought about it, I liked it. I'm toying with the idea of writing the backstory, but I haven't decided if a one-shot could do it justice and I just have too many WiPs to start any more in good conscience.
Thanks for the comments!
Jen
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2005 10:05 pm Title: Fire and Ice
Ick. Arthur Weasley......Ick. I just can't imagine him as some stud. lol. Interesting story though. I thought it was Lupin until the mention of the blue eyes (as Lupin's are considered grey).
Author's Response: lol! I'd say Arthur would have to have a little experience, you know? ;)
Are Lupin's eyes grey? I've been looking for a reference and hadn't found one.
Thanks for the comments!
Jen
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2005 03:42 pm Title: Fire and Ice
hmm very odd pairing
Author's Response: I'll take that as a compliment for creativity ;)
I really don't even know where the plot(less) bunny came from.
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2005 12:16 am Title: Fire and Ice
Alrighty then. My log-in problems are solved, and now I can properly squee over this story. I love it! I don't know that I'd call it PWP because it's really very poingnient (sp?). It makes me wonder what happened before this moment in time and what happens after. Really, it's so much more than mindless smut. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I sort of waffled over the PWP bit, but I don't know what else to call it really. I mean, in the most basic sense, it is porn with no plot. Of course, PWP is usually hotter and more fun than this...
And of course I'm now toying with the idea of writing some backstory for it. *doesn't do very well without her plot*
Thanks for the comments!
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2005 09:19 pm Title: Fire and Ice
Oh no. I just sat here for a few minutes stunned. At first I thought Remus. Then I thought, "Jeez, she's got Remus all over the place." Needless to say, you completely shocked me.
Everything you write is always wonderful. Although, after reading this I felt a little uncomfortable. Almost like I’d just found out that my father was cheating on my mother.
Arthur with Narcissa? It’s just…Molly should kill him. Or should she be grateful? Maybe he’ll be too busy to make her heavy with more redheaded brats.
Author's Response: lol. I felt so dirty writing this, for that very reason. Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed.
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2005 02:33 pm Title: Fire and Ice
The pairing was a complete surprise, but you made it believable. Well done, thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was surprised at how easy it was to believe the pairing as I wrote it, actually. Thanks for the comment!
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2005 01:13 pm Title: Fire and Ice
Very well written. I never saw it coming at the end, but you made it very believable.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.