An interesting and well-written take on a character we don't often see developed.
A most intriguing piece of fiction. I hope to read more soon. I will pop over and read it's companion fic. Great writing as always!
Wonderful word pictures! I'm excited to hear more of Narcissa's tale. She is a mysterious character, one I wish people would write about more often. Great job!
Really interesting. I like the care you have obviously taking in developing Narcissa's character. Please continue!
As always, spectacular. I just loved the way you paired her witnessing Lucius's violent nature with her receiving the ring. It paints a horrifying portrait of Lucius. Can't wait for more.
Once more you set the standards to which all other authors must aspire. Narcissa is fast becoming the character that intrigues me the most, and I love 'Ice and Fire'. Any insight to her mind is wonderful - and this is as usual, excellent. Much love. D