This story popped-up on the random fic box, and I thougth I'd give it a try.
Narcissa was beautifully written. How sad, yet how true it is that the women deal with the consequences of the wars men make. Hmmm... Nicely done. :)
that was good . very very good in fact. but a bit supring!!!!!
that was good . very very good in fact. but a bit supring!!!!!
that was good . very very good in fact. but a bit supring!!!!!
My eyes tear up every time I read this.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting. I am sorry that it took so long for me to respond.
Very powerful story.
Oh! Well done! You certainly did a great job with the character's emotions. I like the fact that Narcissa could put her prejudices aside at the end. Her final redemption.
This was really good--very touching and sad. You described her anguish and the devastation of the war very well. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you reading and commenting. :D