[Report This]Date: 01/29/2010 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful. This piece really lends insite into what could have transpired after Lucius's capture and imprisonment.
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2006 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god that is so sad!!!!! Lucius how could you do that to them?????? I'm about ready to cry!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2006 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god that is so sad!!!!! Lucius how could you do that to them?????? I'm about ready to cry!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2005 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
You have a wonderful way with words, and your ability to capture a mother's love is very impressive. I wouldn't be surprised if you wrote a Best Seller.
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2005 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh! She does actually have a heart... Great start, good to see a story about my fav character (Narcissa) that has depth. How far away is the next chapter?
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2005 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I luv your story!!!! Narcissa is my favorite . I think there need to be more stories about her! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2004 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sniff* Oh, man was that seriously emotional! I loved it, every word of it! What a great point of view of how the Malfoys would feel 'bout Lucius beening locked up. Bravo! Encore! Encore!
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2004 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was lovely. There aren't enough fics about Narcissa, yet she is such an interesting character as you showed here. Kisses GrrArrg
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2004 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1
This looks like it's off to a great start. The italics hurt your eyes after a while, though! I really like your portrayal of Narcissa. She seems very self aware, which is a very rare thing. The fact that you can write a character to be that way indicates that you're probably pretty self aware as well, which is even MORE rare. I look forward to your next chapter. You seem to be alluding that something bad is going to happen.
Author's Response: I think I've fixed that thing with the italics now. thx SL
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2004 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought you did a great job of capturing the complicated emotions that Narcissa and Draco feel now that Lucius is in Azkaban. Will you do one from Lucius' point of view? Just a thought.