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Reviewer: Hyaene Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 05:15 pm Title: Catalyst

A very interesting way of telling a story! I love it! Keep going! :-)

Author's Response: thanks! I'm trying to.

Reviewer: Lydia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2006 09:12 am Title: Catalyst

I am really enjoying how you write the different points of view; this story is quite well done! I look forward to reading more and seeing how Draco and Hermione interact. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is almost done, where Draco and Hermione meet again in their new roles. I'm having a lot of fun playing with Draco and his perceptions of Hermione. I hope you continue to enjoy...

Reviewer: ccrawley10 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2006 02:09 am Title: Meeting

Lot being established in this chapter. The story looks so very promising. Looking forward to reading more of the story.

Author's Response: Yes, this was the last chapter I think that is going to be background...things between Draco and Hermione should start in the next chapter.

Reviewer: hallowsnape Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 05:33 pm Title: Plots

well I would hope they became members of the Order...why do I have the feeling of fore boding where Moody is concerned?

Author's Response: well.....Moody doesn't think most people capable of change....so that could have something to do with it.

Reviewer: zephr_wiltshire Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 04:14 am Title: Plots

YAY! New chapters. Update ASAP! I can't wait for the Hermione/Draco bits in the future!

Author's Response: Well, zephr, they will start soon...either the next chapter or the one after. It depends on how much it takes to get them together. But I do know now where this is going.

Reviewer: Cyranothe2nd Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 06:55 pm Title: Plots

Coolie! Nice story. CAn't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks, I am working on the next...and determining how difficult I want to make things for our friends...how much shall they suffer....hmmmm....

Reviewer: hallowsnape Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 02:37 am Title: The Search

well, I'm intrigued write on!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're intrigued. I have the next chapter ready to submit, so it should be up soon!

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 11:25 am Title: The Refuge

great story. waiting for more. p

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. The next chapter is being submitted right now!

Reviewer: zephr_wiltshire Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 09:23 pm Title: The Refuge

Good chapter. I can't wait until the next update. I actually can't find anything wrong with this story (spelling / grammer wise....) thats good. any ways. update soon Love Zephie

Author's Response: No mistakes is because of the wonderful moderators here at SH. There were 7 in the first draft I submitted. They put in a lot of work to keep this archive great, and I am thrilled to be posting here. Thanks for the compliment...I hope to update soon.

Reviewer: zephr_wiltshire Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 09:11 pm Title: Prologue

This is really good. I find it guite difficult to find a good story in this style. This is good, I am quite absessed with agnst. so yay for that.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I hope to get a chance to finish the next chapter this weekend...

Reviewer: dhark_charlotte Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 09:22 pm Title: The Refuge

Interesting story. Hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, you will!

Reviewer: Lydia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 12:49 pm Title: The Refuge

I can't wait to see what the future holds, either - more please!!

Author's Response: working on it! really...Next chapter should be up soon...

Reviewer: LariLee Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2006 08:13 pm Title: Prologue

I just have to say that I think you've done an excellent job of portraying what could happen to Malfoy at the beginning of Book 7. I think you've done a wonderful job with the inner monologue. I'm definitely looking forward to more.
~Lisa/LariLee

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment, esp since it's really thanks to you :). I was going for in character, but with the possibility of reform...we'll see...

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