Gasp!
Remus can be so annoying. OK, I agree with him... but still!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Remus can't die! He'll take Hermione with him! PLEASE DON'T LET HIM DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, PLEAES update soon! The suspense is KILLING me!!!!!!!!!!!!
Again... not enough embelishments, here. Nice cliffhanger.
Omigod!!! It's so cruel to just leave me hanging like that. Please post more soon so I don't have to worry too much.
Wow! Simply wonderful. I'm so happy for Remus and Hermione, and I can't wait to read more and find out what happens!!
My God, I feel terrible for Hermione and Remus. Her life is seemingly ruined from her pregnancy. I really admire her for keeping it, although a dark dank evil part of me is secretly hoping she'll have a miscarriage or something so she will have her chance at greatness in the wizarding world, even though it's exceedingly evil to wish someone would die, even though it's only a character in a story. I am terrfired for Hermione. Please let there be a happy ending, and please let everything turn out okay. Now, as for the business of a baby..... they seem like a lot of fun to write! You can let the characters slip out of character and blame the stress and hormones of pregnancy for it, and you get to pick a gender and name for the child. Personally, I hope it's a girl, and they name her something to do with the moon, seeing as Remus is a werewolf, and Hermione is beautiful like the moon, or some sentiment like that. Maybe even Artemis, the goddess of the moon in Greek Mythology. :P I have a fetish for the moon. :) Don't mind my ramblings. I really love this story, as I do all your fantastic stories. This one has served as a warning: Don't do anything if you can't handle the consequences. I really admire you for writing such eloquent pieces. PLEASE, keep writing, and update soon!
That was a chapter which could do with a few more paragraphs.
Wonderful writing and extremely sensual and romantic. Pat yourself on the back.
As much as it's hard for me to imagine Remus and Hermione togther, you definitely make it real and work.
I love how you so delicately play the dynamics of being a teenager. Yeah, she's a kid. But there's so much more to it. She's a young woman with deep emotions, and she's found herself in the difficult position of loving an older man. Excellently done!
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
WOW! ok i am addicted. Awesome story.. nasty greasy git... wonder how things will end up... please put me out of my misery soon! update, update ..update! please!!!! *way too much caffeine i think* thanks again!
Making lists to decide about the baby? Allowing her parents to send her to her room? Good grief! She's a child, and my heart goes out to her.
Well, I'm glad SOMEBODY is telling it like it is. I can't believe my beloved Lupin was so careless with someone he's supposed to love ! GRRRRR
Actually... it is rape. And it was bad, very bad of Lupin. However, it's a really sexy story.
My. Favorite. Story. Ever. Love it, love it, love it. (Though I am very interested in those two stories of yours that include Sirius. Very interesting indeed.) Nope. They're good, but this is still my favorite.
Love this! I'm fanatical, but this is so freaking good.
*Sigh* What a wonderful story.
If I could write, I'd want to write just like you. ^^
Masterpiece!
I religiously followed this at FFN and AFF and I just had to reread it again. It's a masterpiece in my humble opinion and just as good the first time I read it. I love this odd yet sexy pairing. Great job.
oh boy, oh boy, oh boy - Es does a little happy dance all around as she begins the adventure of this wonderful story again from the beginning. I loved this story when I read it somewhere else and when I saw it here, I just plunged in and started again. It is as wonderful as I remembered. So emotional; it just grips your heart and hangs on.
One tiny thing: In the paragraph that starts with "Remus’ lips were . . . ‘Just to let him no [should be know] that someone cares’ "
Let out large sign of satisfaction with the wonderful first chapter and return to the second while eyeing the hands of my clock which have suspiciously moved way too far around since I wandered in here for "just a minute."
What?!?! Why did you leave it here, of all places! Please don't leave us here too long, it's like the Crutatius!
Alright, now I know I read more chapters than this somewhere else. ff.net maybe? I'll have to find it - it's been so long ago! Anyway, it's a great story, as I've probably told you before - keep posting!