Shame on more people for not reviewing this! It's very nice. Very dark but IMO a good representation of Snape's charecter, and Lupin's too, I suppose.
I have so much to say, I don't even know where to begin. This is wonderful. You have such a way with words - your descriptions are so rich, they immediately catch my attention. At several times, I wanted to stop and review, but I couldn't do it because I just had to keep going. Particularly after the dream with Padfoot and Snape's cowardice speech. But, this chapter was incredible, so vivid and I really could see it happening. There's only so much a person can take, especially a person with heightened sensations. Anyway, this is fantastic and I can hardly wait for more.
This is such a great story - I absolutely love it. Too good not to finish...
This is such a good fic. Why did you stop posting? Please give us more!
This was a great chapter!
Extremely cool scene.
"the cuff of the left leg far to worn and threadbare" you mean "too worn" So far this has gripped me.
This is facinating. I hope you plan to continue the story.
This is facinating. I hope you plan to continue the story.