Reviewer: Seph7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 04:24 pm Title: (1/1)

Wheres the next chapter? I'd love to find out what happened!!

Reviewer: SataiDelenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2005 05:15 pm Title: (1/1)

QUOTE: "Author's Response: Thank you darling.. Some people just cn not appriciate(sp?) the Lack of Snape in fic... *sigh*" END QUOTE. Sweetheart, it has absolutely nothing to do with that. It's the fact that you chose to write a story about Remus and Hermione in such a way that left an area open and the logic didn't flow smoothly. Fact: Snape is a Death Eater. Fact: It is a high probability that he would have been in attendance at the gathering you wrote. Fact: You wrote the situation in a way that when things got out of hand an opportunity possibly would have arisen where Snape could have saved BOTH Remus and Hermione. I realize that this is Wolfsbane and not Ashwinder. But it is the way in which YOU wrote the story that left this avenue open. I am sorry that you are incapable of realizing this. And because of the way in which you wrote the story thus far, that fact IS a flaw. It shows your immaturity that you are incapable of discussing this fact by getting offended by this. Now, maybe you knew this was a flaw and merely hoped that no one would pick up on this possibility. However, someone did. And you shouldn't get offended that this was pointed out. Perhaps the next time you write a story, you'll think about the things you write a bit more thoroughly to avoid potential outside avenues from being discovered. I happen to like Remus/Hermione stories as much and sometimes more so than Snape/Hermione stories. The fact that you are incapable of accepting that someone found a flaw in the flow of logic in your story shows your immaturity and inability to discuss the potential problem. For that I am truly sorry.

Reviewer: SataiDelenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2005 02:28 am Title: (1/1)

lol. Touchy, touchy. I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story. I'm merely informing you of a flaw I found with it. What you choose to do with that info is completley up to you.

Author's Response: FLAW? Did you write this story? Is this plot bunnie yours? No? I didn't think so. As I said... This story was not written as a Snapefic.. It is REMUS/HERMIONE. You are on a site called Wolfsbane.. Severus will not come to the rescue! Ever!!! Besides you are the one who got pissy first!

Reviewer: SataiDelenn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2005 12:15 am Title: (1/1)

Wow. So sad! But a good beginning so far. Except for one little thing that has been plagueing my mind.... As a Death Eater, why wasn't Severus present and why didn't he stop Remus from mating with her and changing her?

Author's Response: Severus is a spy... He couldn't blow his cover???? Or maybe he really is as bad as everyone thinks.....

Reviewer: Chii Tagoshi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 01:01 am Title: (1/1)

Hey, I loved it. It was very... unusual. It was something I thought I would ever read, which made it oh-so-much-more-better to read. There is one thing I was wondering. Are you planning to add on to this or was it just a one-shot. When I read it, it seemed like it was going to be only a one-shot, but then it also said it was not completed. Just wondering. -Chii

Reviewer: Moyruh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2005 02:10 am Title: (1/1)

Wow. You should continue this fic.

Reviewer: lupin69 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 04:22 pm Title: (1/1)

a great story! leaves the reader wanting another one! plz write more!

Author's Response: Actually i have a plotbunnie for the continuation of this fic.. I have a couple of other projects to fi ish before i start it though

Reviewer: KajisGirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 01:48 am Title: (1/1)

Is it done? If not (even if it is) please write more.

Reviewer: scifichick774 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2005 01:02 pm Title: (1/1)

That was beatifully written. You didn't lose the angsty tone of it at any point and though I feel bad for both of them, I'm siding with Dumbledore's end thought. Nicely done.

Reviewer: runaway mental patient Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2005 02:53 am Title: (1/1)

not bad