Wow... I barely know what to say, and that's quite a rare occurence.
First, I want to say that this is very well written, I was enthralled, and my heart is still pounding.
Second, congrats... That was very realistic from my own experience with living on the streets (thankfully not doing what Remus was).
You get Sarah's Gold Star!
Thank you for writing this!
Author's Response: Hello there! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review! What you wrote there really touched me and you can be sure I'll keep it in my pocket! I'm especially glad that the tone sounded right to you... and that I got a Gold Star, lol! :) Again, thank you, you made my day!
interesting... very interesting
Author's Response: :) I'm glad that you're intrigued; chapter 2 is on its way! Thanks for leaving a review!