[Report This]Date: 09/02/2007 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was about to fave the story for the twin-speak alone, but now I just want a soap portkey. Great one-shot, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2007 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this one a lot.
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2007 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
im not much of a lupin/hermione fan but this story... it was very.... hot. =) keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2007 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2006 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn, that was hot. I enjoyed it throughly. Though, I think Hermione let the towel fall just a little too soon, it would have been nice to see them both squirm a little bit more. But all in all, I enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2006 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great one shot! You can fit so much story into one fic! You've got a real talent for what should be summarized and what should be detailed. Bravo!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
My god. That was orgasmically wonderful. Probably the best Remus fic I've ever read. Thank you very much! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2006 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooooooo, I love softy Lupin, but I love the manly, sweep her off her feet, shag her senseless Lupin just a little more!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2006 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED IT I giggled so much. hahaahha The twins were perfect!!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2006 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG That was awsome, i loved every second of it!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2006 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Gotta love those twins! Maybe I could convince them to make the portkey connect to my bathroom nest time....? Another perfect score! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/2005 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
*drools all over keyboard* Lucky little Hermione! That was totally great! Very sexy and very hot! Gotta love those twins! Great job with the story! Awesome writting!
[Report This]Date: 10/27/2005 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! i really liked that. very well written
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2005 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Absoutely loved it! briliance in the works!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2005 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
who needs cannon...this was hot ^^ yummie bathroom sex. thats all a person needs
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2005 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Good story! I enjoyed reading it. Well written. Loved Fred & George's prank!
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2005 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
great story. thank you.
[Report This]Date: 09/08/2005 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Heee. So lovely. =)
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2005 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hehehe this is brilliant!
[Report This]Date: 09/05/2005 01:20 am Title: Chapter 1
The first part of this story with the whole setup of Remus and Hermione trying to covertly watch each other was wonderful. There was a lot of tension and it was delicious. My biggest complaint is that the story is so short it couldn't last long. I love long blocks of prose that talk about the characters infatuation with each other -- just like you did here setting up the action. It was really sweet but also sexy. The dialogue between the twins was perfect -- you captured them so well, I think I could read a whole story about them if you wrote it. The parts I wasn't as keen on were the inclusion of dung (ew -- Remus covered in poop stink isn't sexy to me and I kept wondering if Hermione could smell it once he fell into her bath. He hadn't washed yet after all -- he'd only just grabbed the soap.); how Hermione just dropped her towel seemed a bit rushed. She didn't seem all that surprised or embarrassed to have him just suddenly appear and fall on top of her in the bath. I would think she might have screamed or something, her heart racing with the shock of it. I could see them both struggling to extricate themselves from each other in that confined bathspace, water splashing everywhere. Other than these minor little things (which I think don't work because the story is short -- they might have worked better if the story were expanded some and things were given time to develop), this was a fine story and I would like to read more. The pairing of Remus and Hermione is my favorite right now, and it's getting harder to find them since we have a Remus Tonks explosion lately. Thanks for sharing this, and please write more!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2005 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful job -- though after reading your other fics, why would I expect otherwise? Sweet and hot, and a bonus with a well-written Fred & George!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2005 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I just love a sexy Lupin!!! Good job!
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2005 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, very good, as usual! I wish there were more RL/HG shippers.
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2005 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very hot and steamy. While you did abandon the canon couples, I like what you did. Very, very Fred and George on this one. Nice practical joke that turned out well in the end.