I love Severous he is IC but so dense about his own and Remus' fellings lovely
aw! you wrote this so in character for ss. it's perfect!
Author's Response: *blush* thank you :)
Wow, you should really write a sequel to this one! I love your Snape and Lupin. You build a really beautiful house on the canon foundation! :) I especially loved the description of Snape's house and the shopping and dining scenes had this really nice true-to-life feel to them. Thanks for a beautiful read! :)
Author's Response: no, thank you for liking it :)
I'm glad you thought it felt true-to-life.
sorry to disappoint you though, I don't do sequels. With my stories what you see is what you get. Still feel flattered though
Oh. Oh. And as I am rather speechless I'll repeat it. Oh!
Sweet - and such longing and patience from Remus. Never liked the overgrown puppy, but I am reconsidering that notion right this instant.
Very well written. Thank You.
Author's Response: "overgrown puppy" *snort* I like that description.
Personally I'm very fond of him, and I'm elated to have caused you to reconsider your opinion of him.
Thank you for giving Remus a chance :)
Wow great story!! The ending was fantastic!! I liked seeing this other side to Snape. :-)
CelticWolfster
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
I like seeing this side of Severus as well
Awww! This is very sweet. Lonely!Snape who sort of wants friends but doesn't know how to make them seems very realistic. And persistent!Remus is adorable, showing up in various alleys and pubs to wrangle some alone time with Snape. Jeez, all three Featured Stories this month are Snupins! Wheee! Oh yes, we shall take over the world. :) ~Lee
Author's Response: Oh yes we shall :)
(though I'm as much of a snarry fan as I am a snupin fan)
I'm glad you thought my portrayal realistic :) thank you
I read it somewhere. It's really good. Especially the part about Severus' eyes.
Author's Response: thank you.
I felt that if Severus were to drop his guard, his eyes would be most expressive. I'm glad you liked that.
Author's Response: thank you.
I felt that if Severus were to drop his guard, his eyes would be most expressive. I'm glad you liked that.
awwww lovely
Author's Response: thank you :)
This is cute. Concise, no PWP *sigh* but still very nice.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
A most excellent story. I hate to be so cliche, but this almost screams sequel. The build up to the end was so good, that I just want there to be more.
Author's Response: Well, it's not too hard to imagine the scene following? Is it?
Thank you for the compliment :), and sorry to disappoint you, but I don't do sequels.
I liked Professor Snape here: clueless and at odds with regards to people. His discomfort and quiet yearning seemed fully compatible with his character as you portrayed him. I would have liked to have seen more of Mr. Lupin, but I think you did a good job of making sure the story was balanced.
You did a great deal in a very little space. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my portrayal of Severus. It was very challenging to write from his pov.
as for more of my work: you can find it on my site, though I did just post a new story here on Wolfsbane.
Wow, what a wonderful story! I love Snape/Lupin fics and this one was wonderful. Just a hint of angst but it did not take over the story. Thank you so much for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)