09-02-2007 16:19 Rated 10

Oh, I'm so glad every time I see an update on this story! A wonderful concept, and combining two of my other favourite stories - Outcasts and I Know What You Do In The Dungeons - is quite brilliant.

I'm curious to hear Severus's explanation for what he did (which enraged me by the way, typical Severus, pushing her away), and I hope she'll react as only Hermione can. As for Lupin's baby and the Lycanthropy idea, it's very original and I'm anxious to see where you go with it. A final note - it's nice to see Rosemary again, she's a great character. Heheh, everytime she talks about her child I'm reminded of "Rosemary's Baby"...

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing it. Severus can be a self-important pain in the ass at times. LOL. But he's making an effort to be more agreeable.

14-02-2007 07:10

You are really good at ending chapters. This is the second in a row that made me think about their closure. Well done.

It seems as though I waited forever for this story to be posted. I must say that I am not disappointed. I think that your descriptions are exquisite, as are you choice of words. I can tell that you have had this story working in your mind for quite some time. I cannot wait to see it unfurl before my eyes. Great job!

I have been loving this story since the beginning! I never really read Remus/OC stories before this and you've changed my mind. Not to mention, I like the idea of Sev/Hermione fics as well! It's amazing! Though I'm quite sad that there hasn't been an update since november.... *tear* Is there anything I can do to get this changed???

I hope you plan to someday add to this story, it's truly wonderful, heartfelt and I love the interactions and the seperate storylines between characters. Please update soon! ~K

Author's Response: I do plan to update soon. Updates are coming slowly because my husband retired and I went back to work full time. I hope you hang in there with me. :)

After reading this on Ashwinder, I came over to read Outcasts. Imagine my joy to find you one chapter ahead here! I haven't read Outcasts yet, but between this story and I Know What You Do, I am really impressed. I'm a little bit tired, so my review won't be as comprehensive as I would like. The only thing I can really think of that bothers me, is the jump between I Know What You Do and here is rather, well, jumpy. I was totally lost for a few minutes. Perhaps a note, letting us know where we come in? Otherwise, I really like your Remus and Rosemary. Their reactions to Phillips birth were, just, wow. Anger confusion denial... The whole nine yards. Well done. I can't wait to see more of this!

i have been looking forward to an update and it was great. Love the interaction between the characters and looking forward to what happens next.

Finally an update! Great chapter! It seems it's the base for interesting and disturbing developments in the future. If Severus is really that genuis he will find a way to save the baby... I hope! So now my daily routine starts again: checking Wolfsbane for the next update. I hope that happens soon!

Ah, wonderful as always. Maybe there is hope for Severus to be happy?

Getting pissed on by Marauder spawn was one indignity he could live without.

This is the greatest line - lol!

I like the "friendship" developing between Lupin and Snape, not sappy, supportive and honest. The character flaws seem well planned and used for a purpose. I really like the way you're writing this.

I adore Rose and Remus, but am anxious to see how/if Severus and Hermione resolve their differences. My heart aches for Remus and Rose. Please update soon. I check for this story every day! Please please please keep up the great work.

You realise that I drop everything to read your updates, don't you? Including almost getting caught with a Wolfsbane window open at work just now, gah! Another engaging and totally compelling chapter, darling. I think I read the whole thing with my breath held. Hermione is pitch-perfect; Snape's mixed feelings about their past is so wonderfully Snape-ish; Lupin and Rosemary are heartbreaking; and that damn Annabelle is just adorable.

I love your interactions between Lupin and Snape, as well - you would do any Snupin writer proud. Their careful friendship, if it can be called that (and I think it can) is so rich and complex, details that come out in so few words between them. I love how Snape asks that oh-so-difficult question at the end (and especially the way his disarms Lupin before asking!) I am completely swept up in this family and their race against time to avoid tragedy. Keep it coming! ~Lee

you once again amaze me.