Wow, this was a Twilight Zone-type ending. Was not expecting that. Now I have chills! Very imaginative story - thanks for sharing.
Hello there my dear! What a nice little piece! I enjoyed it very much!
oh wow. that was dark and made me actually cringe. great job.
oh wow chilling
oh wow chilling
Author's Response: Thank you, Anijade! I didn't mean for it to be, but it took on a life of its own ;)
Oh. My. God. Great Work. Really.
Author's Response: Thank you, Blackcherry!
This is purely evil, and brilliant ^^ Poor Remus, it must be horrible to realise the true nature of the man he loves. If i was in his place I would wonder if Severus truly loved me. I very much like how you make it seem as though everyone was just fine - until shortly before the end.
Author's Response: Thanks, Yulara! I'm sorry I took so long to respond...must turn on review notification!
That was EXCELLENT, brief, simple, yet it proves the point masterfully. Well done. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind feedback and encouragement, Artemis :)
I liked this very much! Excellent twist at the end, definitely not what I expected. Darker fanfics have always been my favorite... looking forward to more from you.
Author's Response: Thank you for your compliments! I like darker fics myself, as you probably have guessed :)
Oh, my. Very chilling! I have to admit I was surprised when I got to the ending. Very unexpected. Great job!
Author's Response: You words mean a lot to me, because as I wrote this I couldn't tell if I had given it away or not. Thank you!
I take perverse satisfaction in reading 'Voldemort wins' fics. This one was pretty darn good. I can believe that Snape would fight for his own causes instead of fighting for good or evil. Good story.
Author's Response: Thanks, winna! I sometimes feel that Snape is just 'walking the fence,' and I'm happy to see you found it believeable, as well.
Good. Even if there are any mistakes, I'm glad that you didn't change the fic. You shouldn't; the story's fine. Hell, it's better than fine - it's great. Speaking of Hell, I thought Remus's last line was very clever. Bit sad, though. But eh, sad is good, 'specially if it's well-written, which is what you've done. Hope you continue. cheers.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Suze! I wasn't sure about the last line originally, but I really felt that it needed to be there. Your review made me feel much more comfortable about it!