[Report This]Date: 07/16/2008 03:53 pm Title: Controls and Compulsions
I really like this and hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Chapter 4 should be coming soon. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2008 08:13 pm Title: Controls and Compulsions
i love ur gifts of pleasure story write more soon please?...:)
Author's Response: I am currently working on chapter 4, and hope to have it finished soon. I do tend to take my time with them as I don't want to rush them. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 05:12 pm Title: Controls and Compulsions
LOVE IT! Can't wait to see more... (rubbing hands together accompanied with sinister laughter)
Author's Response: Thanks! I am writing chapter 4 at the moment, but it's taking some time, as I don't want to rush it and make a mess of it. I just had to go and pick a genre that was difficult to write!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2008 05:20 pm Title: Controls and Compulsions
Wow! Love this story! Very hot! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2008 05:35 am Title: Controls and Compulsions
I loved it. It was well worth the wait. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for being patient! It won't take as long for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2008 10:57 am Title: Controls and Compulsions
I am still LOVING this!!! What a lovely surprise this update has been! Pleeeassse update soon:) I'm excited for Snape:P
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm working on the next one, though it might take a little time. It's difficult to keep the balance just right!
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 06:18 am Title: Commands and Confusions
I love your story
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 3 up soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2008 07:50 pm Title: Commands and Confusions
I love these stories. I have never read 'slash' but have always been curious, espesh with Lucius. These remind me more of a powerful erotica. Lucius is everything in your story that I would have wanted. At first I felt really sorry for Thalia, I was 'there' with her, feeling her angst and almost on the point of disliking Lucius, but as I read on I felt more sorry for myself because I WASN'T Thalia! Lucius is so sexy. But I absolutely love Snape too so PLEASE bring him in soon. I am going to 'be' Thalia the next time I read your submission. A credit to you my friend. Well done!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Snape will be here soon! I'm glad you like it, I was worried I hadn't gotten the balance right. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 09:23 pm Title: Commands and Confusions
Good story! When's the update? It appears the last chapter is from March '07...
Author's Response: I didn't realise it had been so long! Chapter 3 has been submitted, and should be available soon! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 12/29/2007 10:12 pm Title: Commands and Confusions
I would expect nothing less from Lucius - he is a selfish, powerful character that is intriguingly attractive, in a dangerous, unpredictable way - I like how he is depicted, enticing her to want more from him, while still overpowering her freedom - keep it coming! (so to speak!!)
Author's Response: It is very difficult getting the balance right, but I hope I have pulled it off! Thanks for reading! Chapter 3 up soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/05/2007 04:21 pm Title: Commands and Confusions
a good story , keep it up !!!! please update soon can hardly waite
Author's Response: Chapter 3 should be up soon, and chapter 4 is in the works. It is very hard getting the balance right, but I hope I have pulled it off! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 08/07/2007 08:30 pm Title: Commands and Confusions
OMG! is all I can say! Awesome work! :) Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 3 should be approved soon, and I am working on the next one!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2007 12:57 pm Title: Commands and Confusions
I have a real weakness for good stockholm-syndrome fics, and looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am having difficulty writing the next chapter, even though I know what I want to have happen, but I'll get there, and hopefully post again soon!
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2007 07:09 pm Title: Commands and Confusions
I like what I've read so far and can't wait to read more. How did you ever come up with the idea of the story?
Author's Response: Thanks! I have no idea where it came from, but I have read stories along the same lines, and thought I'd try a different tack. I will be updating soon!! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 02:29 am Title: Commands and Confusions
08-01-2007 21:31 Rated 10
I thought the non-con was bad enough, but it's even harsher the way Lucius set up the food situation for Thalia. She has to make her own food, but she's only provided with ingredients that would give her only a carb and dairy diet. Er not counting his strawberry juice.
Author's Response: For a minute, I wasn't sure if you liked the story, but then I noticed the rating of ten, so I can only assume that you did!
I am going for a difficult balance of control and a sort of half-polite concern. The carb diet was all I could think of at the time, but later on I will have her ask for more varied ingredients.
If there is anything you can suggest to improve the story, please let me know!
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 02:28 am Title: Commands and Confusions
19-11-2006 03:22 Rated 10
Such a tricky wizard! He's certainly working at keeping her off balance; first, by giving her pleasure and second, by subtlely threatening her.
You are doing a wonderful job at combining plot with sex. Very, very hot.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried I hadn't gotten the balance right. He isn't trying to scare her half to death, but he wants her to know that he will punish her if she fights him. It's not easy to get the balance right, but I like being able to try! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1
08-01-2007 21:14 Rated 10
"He was by no means into torturous sex or bondage" - well, I usually expect that with Lucius fics, so it was interesting to see another side to his character.
Author's Response: I do like those fics, but I am unable to write them with any amount of accuracy and believability, so I decided to write it in the sense that he knows what he likes and wants to be in control, but he also wants a sort of quasi-relationship in which he gets pleasure from giving as much as receiving, and it is his way of getting her to accept what she has with him as opposed to being placed with other Death Eaters. I hope it is written ok!!
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2007 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1
16-11-2006 06:05 Rated 8
Very good beginning. I hope that you will continue this story. Please don't give up on it. Though I do understand how time consuming life can be I hope you won't give up continuing this story. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh, I intend to keep writing! I have plans for the story, but whether the muse will honour them remains to be seen!!! Not to mention as you said, life! Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2006 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Doesn't his mind work in wild and wonderful ways? If she enjoys it, then it isn't rape. He's very quick to justify her lack of pleasure by her being a novice. Right, Lucius, keep thinking that way. Nice chapter btw.
Author's Response: Yes it does! Well, thats the thing with non-con, Just because he is trying to get her to enjoy it, doesn't mean she was receptive to his advances, she didn't have a choice. But, thats the area I'm going for; to him, because she is enjoying it, albeit reluctantly, it cannot be rape. He's trying to fool himself into thinking that, therefore taking away some of the blame. Don't worry, there will be lots more to come! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07/22/2006 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice first chapter! I usually like my Lucius a bit more evil (yes even more) but I will definitly come back for more!
Author's Response: He's not a complete angel, there will be some moments of evil in future chapters, but I'm ultimately trying to portray him as someone who believes he's not doing anything wrong, even if it is non-con!! Next chapter soon!!
[Report This]Date: 07/20/2006 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1
adore it! Please do continue for I am positivly in love with this plot bunny!
Wonderful writing...
Indeed Lucius is sexy (ohh understatement..*Grins*) but I would be the same way in that situation. Blast it.
Dk
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was so worried about the subject matter not being received well. chapter 2 is being written as we speak!
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2006 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I havent read a good Lucius fic in a while! Cant wait to read what happens next! ; )
Author's Response: Thank you so much! He's my joint fav along with Snape, which I also have a couple of stories in progress on Occlumency. Updates soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2006 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm... an interesting read... I'll keep reading... :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! Its not what I'm used to writing, but I've been inspired to do it, so I'm having a go! Updates soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/17/2006 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jammie git! I knew you were hiding a new story from me! This is different from the other! He seriously is deluded isn't he? Thinking that it isn't rape if he gets her to enjoy it. Tut Tut. He's still a sexy beast though!
Author's Response: Cheers hun! I know I kept it quiet, but it had a lot of work and editing that needed doing before I could post it. Working on chapter two as we speak!