[Report This]Date: 01/20/2005 11:01 am Title: In Another World
I like it. It is like a white poem, with a steady rhythm and melody going through it. It flows. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2004 12:57 pm Title: In Another World
I cannot say that I like this as much as I like your multi-parter. It is not a novel idea. Graveside meditations - how many of those have we had? However, I would say that there are a lot of felicitous touches that reveal your talent, like remembering Snape's disastrous intervention at the end of PoA. You have taken an idea that was not particularly novel, but you have developed it very well.
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2004 08:25 am Title: In Another World
Achingly poignant. Heartrending. And poetic. You've given Remus such wisdom, depth, and hindsight that perhaps only he can have. There's also a sense of powerlessness, which certainly understandable given his lycanthropy. Yet he is very much resigned to the fact that he can't do anything anymore. He's not angry, or at least I didn't get the impression that he was. I also like the fact that he recognized the possibility that perhaps they had a part in Peter's betrayal. Though what Peter did was inexcusable, it might not have been inevitable. Perhaps there's a reason why Remus is the surviving Marauder. Life has dealt him a lot of blows, but these made him stronger and definitely wiser. He's learned to move on. Quite profound. Good job!
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2004 08:53 pm Title: In Another World
I enjoyed this story. Remus's sadness is so well-expressed...his thoughts of Sirius, and a life wasted by Azkaban and other difficulties were well-written. Good job!
[Report This]Date: 09/24/2004 07:40 am Title: In Another World
Beautiful. Poetic. Sad. I love it. Usually I am just not one for quiet musings, because they all tend to be the same, but I thought this one was extremely well done. It made me think about Sirius on a level I had not before. Truely I never morned him the way other fans had seemed to, but looking at all aspects of him I do mourn now. For him, for Remus, for Harry, for the deaths I know are still to come. Very well done, you definatly brought both Remus and Sirius to life; made them 3-d. Kudos