Oh, poor Lucius! How can Voldemort do this to his great servant? Nice story! Please keep on writing!
Author's Response: I have always believed that within evil, there is no such thing as an ally. A truly evil person only uses another for as long as they are useful. Perhaps Lucius bored him...? I am glad you like it!
omg you can't not finish i wanna know what happens please.....
Author's Response: Hi Anika! If you don't want to wait for the chapters to post here, tou can check the story out on www.adultfan.nexcess.net
Thanks for the wonderful review!!!
Ah - sorry, didn't do my research correnctly - the site is www.thepetulantpoetess.com. Just in case people are interested. :)
I'm eager to read more - it sounds *quite* interesting - but it seems the site www.petulantpoetess.com is not up...:-/ I like the idea, though, please post more!
Author's Response: Hmmm... Well if you can't access PetulantPoetess, try AFF, or Whispers. It is there also. Pureblood is very picky about making sure all punctuation is perfect, and they only let you post two chapters at a time. I am currently waiting for them to check out the next chapter. But that still doesn't mean they will post it. Try www.adultfan.nexcess.net
I like this one. One for the romantic in us who always want to believe there is good even in the bad ones lol. Please continue :-).
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. I have to say.. I am having some difficulty getting all the chapters posted here. It may take a while. If you are interested in reading more sooner, check out the story at www.petulantpoetess.com
I really liked it. I admit I find the Malfoy family fascinating. Since the name Malfoy means "bad faith" I think the idea that Lucius has please his trust in the worst possible source is a very good foundation for this story. Perhaps he will learn and grow from this tragedy. Please contine
Author's Response: I am so pleased that you are enjoying it. It is an idea that is actually becoming very close to my heart. I think it will work well.
I think this is a good start. I mean, honestly, how much do we really know about Lucius? It's completely plausible that the Dark Lord would underestimate his love of his family vs. his loyalty. In that case, what Voldemort did would have broken Lucius and I can see him reaching this point. Pray continue.
Author's Response: I promise there will be more to come!
Let's hear some more please, the Herm/Lucius pairings are interesting
Author's Response: You will. I promise. There are three more chapters already waiting to be proofread. But we have to wait for Sycophant Hex to approve them! Glad you are liking it!
It is definitely worth another chapter! I look forward to the next chapter if you decide to post another. Brilliant!
Cheers,
Phoenix Malfoy
Author's Response: :-) I am so glad you are enjoying it. I have four chapters waiting for Proofreaders to accept. Hopefully, you won't have to wait long.
Great start looking forward to the meeting and how Lucius takes it. Hope you write another chapter
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. I am already five chapters into the story, but they have to verify each chapter before posting it, so I am unsure how long that will take. Hopefully, you won't have to wait long.
I like the OOC Lucius. It is an interesting preface, one that I think could be very good.
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a few more chapters up that are waiting for approval! I am thrilled that you are liking the idea. Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you think!
OHH me like & realy do not like H/LM parings, i'll give this a shot. This sounds like Phantom Of The Opera...good job so far.
Author's Response: Thank you... It is alot like Phantom, and also Beauty and the Beast, but with it's own personality, as well. I will try to get more chapters put here soon.