[Report This]Date: 10/11/2005 03:50 pm Title: Darkness in Tombs
I love it that this story is posted! You do great work! I just recommended this story to my AR fan group, so you might be getting another batch of readers, and hopefully many more reviews!
Author's Response: Thank you, Jessica. You must take some of teh credit for that! It is due to your help!!!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2005 07:53 am Title: Darkness in Tombs
You said you are evil, I think that ypou are a genius - as a great fan of Lucius,perhaps the greatest...- I am glad to have found your fic. It surprised me a little but... I bow before your fantastic brain and imagination!I give you a nine 3/4, nah ok a ten. It's one of the best fics I have read on this website. Congrats !!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you soo very much! It makes my day when someone takes the time to tell me how much they like my plot. Of course, Lucius belongs soley to JKR... But I do so love to play with him.
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2005 07:30 pm Title: Hidden Truths
ACH! And now it's really getting good!!!! Please update soon!!!!! This is such a good story!!!!!! Thank you for continuing to update!!!!
Author's Response: Ok... Final chapter is up. I do hope you enjoy it...
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2005 07:05 pm Title: Awakenings
Well, nevermind. I take back my thanks for not making either Harry or Ron into a prat. You did a damned good job at turning Harry not only into a Prat, but a mega ass as well (of course, they probably mean the same thing, lol, but, whatever).
Author's Response: RELAX!!! Harry will calm down, and be her friend forever, just like we know he is supposed to be... He just needs some time to adjust. If one of your best friends suddenly slept with someone that neither of you had once trusted, how the heck would you react? Anyway, he will get over it, and all will be well between them
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2005 06:41 am Title: Reporting of Traitors
Wow. Well, thank you for not making Ron out to be a thick-headed dolt like he usually is AND thank you for not making Harry one either. Yeah, they were both upset she chose Lucius, but at least they didn't act as prattish as they have been made out to be in other fics! Thank you for keeping it well-written!!!!!
Author's Response: Well, I figure, in JKR's style... Harry and Ron would both be seriously upset, but at the same time, they do love her, and only want her to be safe and happy. Harry will get his head out of his butt in the future, and Ron will be ok as well. Glad you are liking it!
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2005 03:48 am Title: Awakenings
Ewww...I feel so violated that Pettigrew watched the show. Slimy little git. Other than that, love the smut! :)
Author's Response: I am so glad! That was how I wanted the reader to feel. Kind of like, OMG! Can you just imagine? And what will happen when she finds out? Oh... The horror! Thanks for all the great reviews!
[Report This]Date: 10/08/2005 09:12 am Title: Hidden Truths
ok, I really like the job you are doing with Ginny. She seems so much older and mature and I love the line about stepping out of the shadows and onto her own path... very cognisant. And Severus is impressed with her new status eh? Good show! Can't wait for the next installment
Author's Response: Thank you... I am so glad that she is developing in a believable way. Also glad that you can enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: 10/08/2005 01:45 am Title: Shocking Arguments
OMG. I love the dramatic turn this has taken. Harry's in love with Mione!
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2005 08:29 pm Title: Hidden Truths
That's a really cool twist. I like the idea of Guardians of Avalon. It's good that Peter got caught. Now, something tells me they have not gotten rid of Voldemort's threat. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: You are most correct in the idea that Voldie is still a threat... I am so glad you are enjoying it! I know I am definately enjoying yours!
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2005 10:27 am Title: Hidden Truths
Awww... so cute! I love the tying in of the two stories!
Author's Response: I am trying to give Ginny a more grown up image, without just entirely rewriting her. Do you think I am doing an ok job?
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2005 02:28 am Title: Arguments and Justifications
Oh please, oh please! Finish the story soon! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out! ^_^
Author's Response: The final chapter has been posted. I do hope you like the way I ended this part of the story... I did leave some things open to be addressed in the next stories... SS/GW, the HP/Hope M
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2005 10:17 pm Title: Arguments and Justifications
I like how Severus brings up the age difference as a reason why Lucius shouldn't be going after Hermione. of course, the revelation that he's attracted to Ginny makes that very hypocritical...The Ginny/Hermione discussion was good, too. I think it hits on Severus' personality pretty good.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2005 01:33 pm Title: Arguments and Justifications
more more more more more more please
Author's Response: Final chapter now up... I do hope you will enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2005 02:16 pm Title: Unexpected Surprises
I love the style in which you write. I too am a fan of the classic "Beauty and the Beast". The imagery you create is stupindious!
Kepp on keepin' on. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: There should be another chapter up soon. I am so glad you are liking it!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2005 04:16 am Title: Awakenings
Love the chapter, but I don't understand something... what happened to Voldie's body that he created with Harry's blood? Why does he need another body to go into? And what about what Narcissa and Draco said about Hope being important to Harry? Surly, you don't mean she'll be important because he'll have to kill her because she is Voldie!! At least I hope not! Well, anyway, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Voldie's body that he created from Harry's blood... I know that it isn't quite what JKR is doing, but the way I envision it, is that the consequence for his actions would be a swiftly aging, easily broken body. I didn't explain that very well, but I will in later chapters. I'm sorry... I am glad that otherwise you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2005 08:15 pm Title: Awakenings
Now that's an interesting turn of events. I liked the scene with Voldie and Wormtail. I can see him not believing that Lucius would go for Hermione...The scene with the guys arguing over Hermione rings true for me. I do think that Ron would be more likely to see past his previous judgements...Now, how bad are things going to get for our couple?...Oh, yeah, I loved Lucius' reaction to her question about him having planned it. LOL Absolutely wonderful.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it. I kind of thought that Voldie woudn't believe the info Pettigrew was giving him unless he saw it with his own eyes. I honestly believe that Ron really loves her... He would want her to be happy. Hmm, how bad are things going to get for the couple? There are a few flies buzzing around in the attic that just have yet to come to light...
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2005 02:47 am Title: Shocking Arguments
Your story is so well written, I am loving it! More please!
Author's Response: Thank you, but I must say that the beta readers I have make it a much easier read. JessicaDamien, and notsosaintly do help me so much in making the story come together better with wording and punctuation.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2005 12:38 pm Title: Shocking Arguments
... Oooh. Dear. Luci is in trouble.
Author's Response: :-) I hope you are enjoying it. Two more chapters should be up soon.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2005 12:29 am Title: Shocking Arguments
Ah, okay, thanks for the clarification on the time. I had just had the impression it was a day. :)
Author's Response: Should be two more chapters coming your way soon. I hope!
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2005 11:26 pm Title: Shocking Arguments
Ah, so glad to see them together and the Lucius is finally moving on. I can definitely see Harry being livid over the whole thing. I like how you've shown that he loves her, but was able to give her up to Ron...I'm interested in seeing where this one goes...I guess the only really minor complaint I have is that it seems unlikely she would suffer from morning sickness so soon. Unless I missed something, hasn't it only been a day since they were together? Still a good story. :)
Author's Response: Oh, but Phoenix... this is a MAGICAL baby... They have been together a couple of times before she started feeling anything. AND as far as morning sickness goes, I started having it within the first week with both of my kids, so it can come on fast... I am glad you are liking it, though!
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2005 10:54 pm Title: Shocking Arguments
I take it she realised that Lucius knew all along? Wonderful. Can't wait for the next installment.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2005 09:33 pm Title: Shocking Arguments
How exciting.
Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Well, I just posted the final chapter. I do hope you will be pleased with how it ended... I do also plan a sequel for SS/GW, but we will see...
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2005 05:05 pm Title: Affections
Wonderful, great, marvelous. But WHEN is the next installment? I know a lot of people want to believe the Lucius is completely evil and unredemable but the whole point of Rowling's books is that nothing is all black and white. Prejudice is learned so it can be unlearned. While her books would not be so graphic, I believe she would be pleased with the way you have developed both characters' discovery of each other's value. Growth often comes through great pain! That said, HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT UPDATE.
Author's Response: PATIENCE!!! :-) I have two chapters coming soon, I promise. They are waiting in the queue right now. But you must be patient. They should be up soon. I think! Thank you for the wonderful words. I would hope that JKR would like my play with her characters. I do believe they fit into it very well.
[Report This]Date: 09/25/2005 05:49 pm Title: Affections
I never once thought I could go from being slightly horny to reaching for the tissues to dry my eyes.
Great. Wonderful.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thank you! It makes me proud to know that I can convey the emotions well enough to make a reader feel it.
[Report This]Date: 09/22/2005 04:18 am Title: Affections
Wow! SEVERUS will throw the fit, and not Remus? Well, THAT will certainly be interesting! I can't wait to see that! Thank you for updating so soon! I just love this story! It's such a wonderful read!
Author's Response: I am so happy that you are enjoying the story! I love to hear from all of you! Your reviews are a wonderfully bright part of my day!